Family- Pick Or Pick On

Family...you can't pick them, but...they can pick on you!

John Derek Hamilton
December 07, 2015

For one liner 3
Contest sponsored by Silent One
3rd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Nice play on words, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM
They sure can John:-( hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Congrats! Well said.
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Thanks same to you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:19 PM
very well said!! congrats
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Thanks Andrea, same back to you well done!
Haight Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Very true, indeed! Congratulations on your win, John. Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Thanks Sandra back at ya!
A  Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:58 PM
JOHN, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Thanks SKAT
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 2:13 PM
lol John...well done and congratulations.
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, John.. he has a new one up... not going to get much warmth on a one liner about sports haha
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:31 PM
congrats to you, I think he was looking for warmth, so you nailed it, clever just misses the mark seems like not what he's looking for. Thanks anyway.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations John.
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Thanks Nayda, back to you also.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:55 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in "One liners three- family" contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Congrats goes to you well done, I missed the mark on this one.
Gorelick Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:57 PM
SO true...this is great. BG
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Thanks Barbara for your visit and kind comment
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:41 PM
- So true, we must be satisfied with what we get :)) - Good luck in the contest, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
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