Family On the Rocks

By Carolyn Devonshire
 
casting my line from a rock jetty sad, high-pitch cry I hear glance around, see no one cast again but the cry echoes as if reverberating in the rocks fishing pole I lay down now searching every crevice suddenly a wee feline springs forth mewing alone atop the stone from where she emerged, I look down a litter of six cradled by their mama so thin the mother cat appears no food nearby and tears fill my eyes return to my cooler, retrieving three trout place them in the cranny mama cat meows softly no thanks were needed feeding frenzy begins for the kittens mama cat remains still, but purrs providing nourishment for her clan more important than feeding herself wish the brotherhood of man could learn from mama cat cries of hunger go unheard
*Entry for Michael’s “Sounds of a Cry” contest Based on a true experience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Two featured poemsfor you this week my friend. Congratulations Carolyn. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 8:40 PM
We all could learn a lot. Animals love without conditions attached. Congrats on another feature. Vince
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 11:42 AM
This is really good, Carolyn. Can't believe I missed it earlier. I can't even remember if and when this contest was ever judged. Ok, now it's coming to me!! It got judged a while back and looking down here, I see you scored HIGH. Congratulations!
K. Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Soupmail :)
Guzzi Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:19 PM
So many unwanted and hungry its very sad and yet you should see all the hoops I had to go through to get my Smokey! KInd heart!!! Light & Love
Locksley Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 5:43 PM
I'm real glad you took first place with this one. I think it's one of your best poems. Congratulations, Diane
K. Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:11 PM
This sure is such a touching take on "cry"- really liked that you wrote about learning from cats & wow even more so that this really happened! I see congrats are in order as well ;) & thank you for your sweet comments in my collab with Chris, I had a great time writing that with him :) as for the italics, all together put in the < & i then close it with > & at the end of the line which you want italicized, put in < then / then i then > sorry had to do this way since it comes up as an error hugs
Maverick Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Can't agree More Carolyn, good words today..
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Yes, everyday children go to bed hungry not just in other countries but in our country the USA..Thanks for stopping by my blog, reading, and leaving a comment..Just a few more days and Princess' tail should heal if she will just leave it alone....Sara
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Beadnall Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Nice one with this winner , Carolyn. Enjoyed the narrative story line blessing to you Paul
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 5:44 AM
I don't like cats as they do not agree with my allergies...but something about this poem got me. Thanks for sharing.
Osita Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Very emotional! Many congrats on your well deserved first place win
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 3:44 AM
hey Carolyn, congrats on a great win, David
. Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 3:08 AM
congratulations! you spun the story aptly with emotions and rhymes
Quigley Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:30 AM
Oh how true the words "crys of hunger go unheard". Congratulations on your first place win. Well deserved.
Ali Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:22 PM
I loved the last line and the way you put this forth is truly amazing. we humans surely need to learn a lot from our animal friends. Congratulations.
Wesley Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Oh Carolyn, dear you. Poor little kitty with no food to feed her babies and you are there. I love the sentiment here, so moving.
Johnson Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Beautiful poem and picture of mother love. Congratulations on your no. 1 again Carolyn. Love, Joyce
B Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Excellent 1st place win Carolyn, I knew it was a winner when I laid eyes on it awhile back :)
Poet Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Love the story very much Carolyn...nice message at the end...best wishes...visit me:
Susan Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:12 PM
wonderful message in this one carolyn. love the last line. even though i know there are hungry people in the u.s., I still picture an emaciated person from a 3rd world country, like all those commercials they used to play on t.v. asking for 23 cents a day. anyway, i'm happy you were able to help the cat and kittens. good luck in the contest :)
Horne Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:34 AM
What a lovely story, my friend - great poem too - sure to be a big winner
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Wonderful approach to the theme of the contest, carolyn
Peranteau Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Such a loving write and gesture by yourself Carolyn ! How so true your words dear poet. A touching entry for Michael's contest love ! Have a wonderful night Carolyn....much love(2u), james
Peranteau Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Me O my, what a lightning storm we just went through Carolyn ! Wow ! A lightning bolt slaped down so close to me and my friend just a few minutes ago, it leveled my garden ! Dang !
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