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FAMILY LOVE

Marked well with awesome affectionate care
Family love makes me smile with thanks' bliss
Designed by the Lord for us all to share
Exposing joy, each member should not miss.

Family love makes me smile with thanks' bliss
Along fervent heart exuded by glad face
Exposing joy, each member should not miss
While in the pink of health, beaming with grace.

Along fervent heart exuded by glad face
Golden rings radiate covenant ties
While in the pink of health, beaming with grace
Mom and Dad hold hands; and we do likewise.

Golden rings radiate covenant ties
Yellow bells show anniversary-glow
Mom and Dad hold hands; and we do likewise
Since we their children --- their love story, know.

Yellow bells show anniversary-glow
With sweet peace from family paradise
Since we their children ---their love story, know
Parents’ partnership so true, sans guise.

With sweet peace from family paradise
Home’s warmth oozes midst compassion wonders
Parents’ partnership so true, sans guise
Makes me smile indeed amidst pain's blunders.

Home’s warmth oozes midst compassion wonders
Designed by the Lord* for us all to share
Makes me smile indeed amidst pain's blunders
Marked well with awesome affectionate care.

*Psalms 127:1 Except the LORD build the house, they labour in vain that build it: except the LORD keep the city, the watchman waketh but in vain.

October 24, 2024
Edited on June 21, 2025
1st place, "What Makes Me Smile 2" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Karen Jones; judged on 6/29/2025

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Karen Jones

July 15, 2025 at 4:24 AM

Beata did you get an email from me? I saw your consent in soupmail but need you to email consent please as soupmail deletes in 6 months. Thanks my email is [email protected]

Karen Jones

July 1, 2025 at 1:51 PM

Sent u soupmail today. :0)

Mystic Rose Rose

June 30, 2025 at 3:55 AM

This is excellent Beata congrats on your 1st place win, I can see why Karen loved it so :)

Karen Jones

June 29, 2025 at 11:39 PM

Beata thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win! Your support in my contest means a lot to me! Please allow me time to get organized and I will format the book and get your final permission much later ok?