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FAMILY LOVE

Marked well with awesome affectionate care Family love makes me smile with thanks' bliss Designed by the Lord for us all to share Exposing joy, each member should not miss. Family love makes me smile with thanks' bliss Along fervent heart exuded by glad face Exposing joy, each member should not miss While in the pink of health, beaming with grace. Along fervent heart exuded by glad face Golden rings radiate covenant ties While in the pink of health, beaming with grace Mom and Dad hold hands; and we do likewise. Golden rings radiate covenant ties Yellow bells show anniversary-glow Mom and Dad hold hands; and we do likewise Since we their children --- their love story, know. Yellow bells show anniversary-glow With sweet peace from family paradise Since we their children ---their love story, know Parents’ partnership so true, sans guise. With sweet peace from family paradise Home’s warmth oozes midst compassion wonders Parents’ partnership so true, sans guise Makes me smile indeed amidst pain's blunders. Home’s warmth oozes midst compassion wonders Designed by the Lord* for us all to share Makes me smile indeed amidst pain's blunders Marked well with awesome affectionate care.
*Psalms 127:1 Except the LORD build the house, they labour in vain that build it: except the LORD keep the city, the watchman waketh but in vain. October 24, 2024 Edited on June 21, 2025 1st place, "What Makes Me Smile 2" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Karen Jones; judged on 6/29/2025

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Date: 7/15/2025 4:24:00 AM
Beata did you get an email from me? I saw your consent in soupmail but need you to email consent please as soupmail deletes in 6 months. Thanks my email is Kandle.jones@yahoo.com
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Date: 7/1/2025 1:51:00 PM
Sent u soupmail today. :0)
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Date: 6/30/2025 3:55:00 AM
This is excellent Beata congrats on your 1st place win, I can see why Karen loved it so :)
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Date: 6/29/2025 11:39:00 PM
Beata thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win! Your support in my contest means a lot to me! Please allow me time to get organized and I will format the book and get your final permission much later ok?
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Date: 6/29/2025 8:56:00 PM
Hi Beata Congratulations on your 1st place and yes Family should make us all smile Cheers Christine
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Date: 6/29/2025 8:55:00 PM
Hi Beata Congratulations on your 1st place and yes Family should make us all smile Cheers Christine
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Date: 6/29/2025 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata! Happy homes bring many smiles.
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Date: 10/27/2024 7:18:00 AM
Amen! A colourful poem full of faith and wisdom God bless you.
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