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After vet bills, chewed shoes and squeaky toys, there are no 'free' puppies

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/5/2023 10:41:00 AM

Your poetic prowess is evident in this one liner Michelle, clever and creative. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 9:36:00 PM

Awwn, haha, this one made me laugh, it's sooo cute! I love puppies, but yes, the are not 'free' as they tend to own everything in the house~ this monoku really conveys thoughts with creativity - it's really adorable! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2023 4:14:00 PM

LOL…true! Living animals take much care!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2023 2:30:00 PM

you made me smile Michelle! hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2023 9:13:00 AM

Lol! Michelle, This is funny and true. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/8/2023 5:53:00 PM

So absolutely true, with any luck worth every penny though ~x

Bill Baker

Date: 10/7/2023 3:16:00 PM

We have a WINNER! Congratulations Michelle! You got this right, my friend. There're no free puppies. Have a pleasant weekend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/7/2023 9:17:00 AM

Haha! Dear Michelle, your clever and pithy pen shines in this wonderful monoku! Both your title and verse combine for a potent lil package of insightful poetry. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan