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I wonder why you changed;
my heart can never guess.  
Why did your veneer slip? -
Sly actions to address!

Do you have regrets now?
You seem as warm as ice.
Too many people fooled
to see you act so nice.

for Dear Heart Constance's Lento contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 4/2/2020 7:49:00 AM
Your poems are very clever, sharp and mostly winners - congratulations my friend this poem was very different and enjoyable take care and be safe Jack. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/1/2020 2:57:00 PM
Clever turn at the end, also love the line 'warm as ice' - I see why this was a winner!
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Date: 2/13/2020 9:42:00 AM
Awesome win. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/10/2020 2:11:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/9/2020 1:19:00 PM
Jack, yours was one of the funnest ones for me to read, short and sarcastic! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/26/2020 8:29:00 AM
Hi Jack, It is very hard to sum up people at times, they seem to be like chameleons, ever changing! Brilliant write! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/23/2020 8:58:00 PM
hmmm is this about you know who?? I really enjoyed it, Jack.
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Date: 1/23/2020 12:29:00 PM
A mistress of disguise, no doubt! Hope to see this on the winners' list, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/23/2020 8:49:00 AM
Well said! Great contrasts!
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Date: 1/22/2020 8:24:00 PM
Wow, Very clever Jack. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you also for your visit. C.M.
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Date: 1/22/2020 5:46:00 PM
' Why did your veneer slip?' To read such lines alone is half the reason I adore poetry and good lyrics. Wishing all the best in the Lento contest;-)
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:54:00 PM
Just a few words can say so much. Good luck in the contest. Have not done a contest for a while. love phyl
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:11:00 PM
A scenario many of us can relate to Jack - adding this clever rhyme to my faves for many reasons!:-) hugs Jan xx
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