Fall's Lasting Impression

Furiously blushing Sumac, 
blended with  yellow leafed maple
adorned with now naked vines.
Subdued in evening shadows falling,
the sound of whippoorwills calling
intoxicating the mind.
Fall’s lasting impression
speaks of higher design.

The small critters getting fatter,
looking for a warm safe haven.
The mocking bird and raven
long since following its instinct.
See how it all falls into place,
how so smooth is nature’s twine.
Fall’s lasting impression
speaks of higher design.

It’s time to stop and meditate,
on higher deeds than men impose.
Of how and why sweet repose,
goes hand in hand with nature’s bent
to sit and wait with full intent,
to sleep and rest for a time.
Fall’s lasting impression
speaks of higher design. 

© Oct 31 2010        Charles Henderson
1 st in Catie's "Focus on Syllables" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mannan Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:34 AM
What a deep write this is. Many congratulations for this win.
Guzzi Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Lovely a perfect #1 Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 9:18 AM
A fantastic win with a lovely poem Charles. congratulations for your no. 1 spot. Love, Joyce
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November 7, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Congrats Charles on your big first place win in the syllables contest with this excellent entry .. super piece luv ..enjoy this happy Sunday with 'hellos' to Carolyn please...
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations Charles on a job well done Charles. Enjoy the Glory. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Catie's contest "Focus on Syllables". Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:20 AM
How wonderful this is, Charles...Congratulations on your win~~!!!!
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win. Charles
Devonshire Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on taking the top spot in Catie's contest, Charles! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 7:07 AM
There you go Charles..A first place..very nice and congrats to you. BG
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November 5, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Truly breathtaking images, Charles. I didn't even realize this was a "syllables" entry until I saw the note at the bottom. Nature's plants and critters know how to prepare for winter. Indeed, we need to consider "higher deeds than men impose" as we look at the changes in seasons as well as in our lives. Thanks for your kind words on my poem/letter to John. He stays in my heart and watches over me. Time has helped me deal with the loss but there'll never be another like John. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Fantastic expression you have penned ... Fall's lasting impression speaks of higher design, enjoyed it, Charles
Wilson Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 3:29 AM
this is a very lovely depiction of Fall..take care~Deb
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