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Fall's Charred Breakfast

The croissants of buttered hills glisten in the searing marmalade of August's arid oven. September's cinnamon swirl scorches muffin-colored homes, the flames smothered as October rains send lives and mud sliding into the ravines like apple butter. On Thanksgiving morning survivors eat fall's charred breakfast, then praise God in church. In the milk of spring they rebuild, just like the last time and the time before that.

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Date: 6/5/2018 3:28:00 PM
An utterly delicious poem. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Dale.
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Date: 5/30/2018 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful imagery from a very tasty and satisfying point of view, Dale! Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/30/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 5/29/2018 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this yummy creative poem. Well done!
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Date: 5/29/2018 7:32:00 PM
Many congrats Dale I knew this would be a winner!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/29/2018 7:36:00 PM
Thanks very much, Jan.
Date: 5/29/2018 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful!! Congrats on your win Dale! This is very unique and one of a kind! Keep writing :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/29/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Pailey.
Date: 5/29/2018 12:44:00 PM
such a unique and creative take on the seasons and mother nature. Many congrats on your top-notch win Dale. Elaine
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/29/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine.
Date: 5/25/2018 3:32:00 PM
A masterpiece of a poem that is good enough to eat Dale! Your use of colour and food especially croissants and cinnamon swirls has whetted my appetite, am adding this gem to my faves for when I fancy another bite of your wonderful words!:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/25/2018 4:19:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Jan. Bon Appetit!

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