Fall's Charred Breakfast

The croissants of buttered hills
glisten in the searing marmalade
of August's arid oven.
September's cinnamon swirl
scorches muffin-colored homes,
the flames smothered
as October rains
send lives and mud
sliding into the ravines
like apple butter.
On Thanksgiving morning
survivors eat fall's charred breakfast,
then praise God in church.
In the milk of spring
they rebuild,
just like the last time
and the time before that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:28 PM
An utterly delicious poem. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Dale.
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Beautiful imagery from a very tasty and satisfying point of view, Dale! Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
Cozart Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Gentry Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on your win with this yummy creative poem. Well done!
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Many congrats Dale I knew this would be a winner!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Thanks very much, Jan.
Gordon Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Beautiful!! Congrats on your win Dale! This is very unique and one of a kind! Keep writing :)
Cozart Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Pailey.
George   Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 12:44 PM
such a unique and creative take on the seasons and mother nature. Many congrats on your top-notch win Dale. Elaine
Cozart Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Elaine.
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 3:32 PM
A masterpiece of a poem that is good enough to eat Dale! Your use of colour and food especially croissants and cinnamon swirls has whetted my appetite, am adding this gem to my faves for when I fancy another bite of your wonderful words!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Aw, thanks, Jan. Bon Appetit!
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