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Fall's

Changing

Focus

Fall's Changing Focus

So harsh and cold, the late October wind
Oak branches sway before the orange moon
Bright leaves that filled its branches now have thinned
Just one remains to dance in autumn's tune

But I stroll to the river filled with hope
A group of manatees takes shelter there
Their playful ways have always helped me cope
In winter when the trees have stripped to bare

Our love for living things will linger on
Throughout the winter, we'll seek signs of life
Though dormant plants may seem like they are gone
I choose to see the boons, not study strife

For birds and animals still entertain
When spring returns, we'll welcome blooms again




Written October 31, 2019
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Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Wonderful imagery Carolyn thanks for entering this one, congrats on a fine placement!
Pinet Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations Carolyn! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.
Callus Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Indeed, Carolyn, we learn to cope with whatever each season has in store for us. Looking at the positive points will surely enhance our chances of happiness. Hugs // paul
Laurie Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Hello Carolyn … a wonderful written sonnet Carolyn. Great topic and flows and rhymes so well - thanks Carolyn - Lindsay
Gondolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Beautifully written, Carolyn. The late fall always holds a bit of a somber mood for me, I look forward to spring and summer. All my best to you. Hugs, John
Ball Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 2:44 AM
This is lovely Carolyn. I see Winter as a time for Nature to rest and replenish herself. We all need to rest now and then. Great job my friend. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 3:49 PM
an excellent job here, Carolyn. the meter was nearly flawless and you used wonderful imagery. I hope you are doing well this week. I need to get out of the school now. Complications about the cabinets i chose for our new kitchen. Supposedly the woman who took our kitchen measurements does not think the cabinets go with our house color of paint. DANG
Nance Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:15 AM
absolutely beautiful in words and rhythm!
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page. I hope this is a good day for you. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 4:30 AM
Your lovely poem is filled with the beauty of the season and filled with hope of spring after the snows have melted. This beauty is going into my Faves Carolyn. Sorry I haven't been around much. I have been busy trying to retrieve my photos before Yahoo groups deletes them all. I am sure Emile will love this gem! xxoo
Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 5:02 PM
I know how busy you have been, so thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Hope you finish retrieving your pictures!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:56 PM
Wonderful write Carolyn, there's truth in sentience; Deepak Gupta stated that the universe displays sentience; we often know we are alive best when life presents itself through poignant nature or deep relationships. I am back, posted a new poem should you not know;-)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Exceptional write. Love it. Best in the contest and bless you, Gina
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Gina. I'll check your page.
Adams Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Beautifully written sonnet Carolyn... it's always so sad to see the barren trees of fall and the hush of birds... i always dread winter but love to see spring...each season leads to the next so i know the bad won't last long...enjoyed this one! :) hugs
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Leffanta Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 6:05 PM
Aye, that will be the day! Aloha! Rico
Green Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Beautifully crafted Carolyn. To see not the barren gardens created by this chilly season but the beauty that they will be in the coming spring. There is no better way to look at life. Loved this. Best wishes in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Beautiful sonnet Carolyn, it will be a while but yes welcome blooms again, can't come quick enough. Good luck. Tom.
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October 31, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Beautifully written for a sad season ... "when the trees have stripped to bare" ... a naked and sad picture, Carolyn - Best wishes in the contest ... and Happy Halloween :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 1:01 PM
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY
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