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"Love is grand."
Perhaps we are falling stars lost within a dream
Landing softly on the ripples of a moonlit stream
Carried away to abandoned shores where the forest meets the sea
As every wish we ever knew grew like leaves upon a tree
Maybe we are fate waiting to be seen
Where every wish we ever wished fell like stars within our dreams
So I close my eyes and count the leaves that whisper in the breeze
To catch the tail of falling stars to meet my destiny

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/26/2020 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful. Thank you
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Date: 8/19/2020 12:38:00 PM
I love this. It's a inspiration in verse and I'll come back to you for more words that sway to the music of life... Creative and genuine ~ Beautiful :)
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 9/27/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly appreciate the felicitation.
Date: 6/17/2020 10:36:00 PM
I love this one. A beautiful, gentle love poem. Simplicity is sometimes the greatest way to tell a story.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 9/27/2020 4:27:00 PM
Thank you James.
Date: 5/20/2020 2:24:00 PM
Greeting Andreanna,i love how you brought this full circle,from lost to destiny.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/19/2020 2:22:00 PM
Hello Andreanna, I like this, I like the imagery and calming effect of your words. Well done. Tom Smith
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
Excellent, then I have done my job.

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