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Falling Softly Against a Beloved

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Falling softly against a beloved, silent dawn Leaves of every color, amber and gold Breath of summer joy has finally gone Autumn drifts in to reveal whispers of cold Beautiful joy falls all around the marigold Flowers slowly fade, flowing as is foregone Sighing through the sunshine’s happy mold Falling softly against a beloved, silent dawn Lovely shades of life fall like images drawn To life by creative hand inspired to remold Brilliant hopes and dreams we touch on Leaves of every color, amber and gold Oak, birch and maple who’ve grown old Lift their cheerful branches above the lawn Inspiring the heart with blessings to behold Breath of summer joy has finally gone Across the emerald hills, life begins to yawn Beckoning for one more moment to uphold As sun embraces the naked thoughts over yon Autumn drifts in to reveal whispers of cold Laughing dreams encourage hearts to be bold Through the shimmering moments that wan Revealing faith that fills the soul up tenfold Lighting the way for autumn to pray on and on Falling softly against a beloved….

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Date: 3/3/2021 7:50:00 AM
Loaded with imagery, that takes us on an adventure...into the glories of nature. So glad you can write so beautifully. Hugs, Panagiota xx
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Date: 3/2/2021 7:59:00 PM
Oh my ! Your thoughts curl softly around my heart. The images you paint are so vivid. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. You have created a Masterpiece, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/2/2021 6:39:00 PM
Such a beautifully penned writing Gina, matched by the lovely picture as well. Showing great rhyme and insightful imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 3/2/2021 12:46:00 PM
Regina, this is such a lovely piece, beautifully-written and so expressive. The colors of autumn were radiant. Super impressive work in a difficult form!
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Date: 3/2/2021 11:25:00 AM
This is lovely Gina and the picture is wonderful. Fits in perfectly. Love it. God Bless, JB
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