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Falling Petals

My fingers ran over the bark
“A+K” nestled in a heart
Wouldn’t you come with me, he asked,
I cast a smile now an old scar
The gentle breeze closes my eyes
In the dusting of the springtime 
Sweet scented thoughts of yesterday
Waft too often never to stay
Winds settle and plums bloom no more 
The corpse of our carvings’ a stump
The lady in white pinafore:
"We should go back" - an innate grump
The clinic is a sight weary
None comes as close as “who was he?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/19/2023 8:48:00 PM
A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Fareeha Fareej Mohamed
Date: 6/19/2023 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words :)
Date: 6/19/2023 12:22:00 PM
I thank you graciously for entering my contest. Your springtime poetic apertures have claimed my heart. Congratulations on your win. Be Proud Of Your Successes, Always !
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Fareeha Fareej Mohamed
Date: 6/19/2023 9:11:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely opportunity!

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