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Autumn Leaves Contest of Jcb Brul Submitted 9 Sept 24

A trellis of leaves flutters so naturally, reams hanging free… timeless in a swirl on the curving breasts of night. And they dance, prance without restraint onto altitudes of orbital light, glistening through their russet-gold flesh… Somehow, these leaflets enter into my dazzled world as if to murmur: “We are here, but not for a long, my dear so you must learn our celestial song , unfurl your wings across melodious rivers-- come dance with us ,your beauty fills…” And my hips jut out like a riot of dragonflies, butterflies, fireflies towards the same aurora, draped in a voile-skirt's embrace; my arms and limbs circling in shapes unknown...mysterious as autumn's moonlit croon, while leaves flicker into a hushed tempo of nightfall's revelry, deliriously untame..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2024 2:34:00 PM

I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you that it is there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/25/2024 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations Nette! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/24/2024 2:00:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful, Nette, congratulations:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/23/2024 1:01:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Falling Leaves" write again. Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/20/2024 8:12:00 AM

Nette, this sweet poem makes it clear we need to watch nature with a keen eye. A year is a long time to wait to see this again, and it is nice to enjoy it now. Smiles!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2024 4:31:00 PM

Lovely..."A trellis of leaves flutters so naturally, reams hanging free… timeless in a swirl on the curving breasts of night. " That's a really beautiful beginning....

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/10/2024 11:22:00 AM

Dear Nette, once again your mastery of words and images shines. Love the central theme of "leaves" and their temporal lives. These images are so visceral - they have a pulse! Best wishes for the contest. Autumn blessings of joy to you.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2024 10:05:00 PM

This is a very fantastic and gorgeous poem my dearest poet friend and sis! I can also hear clearly the leaflets murmurings with their lovely celestial songs in this marvelous write of yours. I love it so much and enjoyed immensely. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/9/2024 1:11:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Falling Leaves" write. This is a great time of the year. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Enjoy your day....................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/9/2024 9:50:00 AM

Dear Nette, I love Autumn and your imagism was so full of images of the season that I felt like I was there. I wanted to sing and this is my favorite verses: “We are here, but not for a long, my dear so you must learn our celestial song , unfurl your wings across melodious rivers-- come dance with us ,your beauty fills…” And again maybe you can sign it for us. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel