Beatrice Boyle Poet Couplet

Falling In Love In the Fall

Falling In Love In Autumn (Couplets)

Autumn Love is mature and warm
Surviving Spring and Summer’s Storms

First love blooms in Spring’s first kiss
Young hearts lost in natures bliss

The Bird of Youth flies high and strong
Spring  is when we hear his song

Summer sun brings reality
And no assurance of  constancy

The Rose is Queen in Summer’s Sun
But falls to earth when season’s done

Winter is lonely, dark and cold
Without Autumns love, as we grow old.

Copyright© 2011 Beatrice Boyle, 
(All rights reserved)

For Michael Faolotico’s Contest – Falling In Love In Autumn

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Audrey Haick October 8, 2011 at 8:35 PM Beautifully written Couplet, Beatrice! Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest. Well done! Love, Annalise

Michael J. Falotico October 7, 2011 at 4:29 PM Congtrats and thank you so much for supporting my contest.. It was a true pleasure to read.. always Michael

Joe Maverick October 7, 2011 at 4:09 PM A most charming write Beatrice, and worthy of its place in Michaels contest..

Debbie Guzzi October 7, 2011 at 12:53 PM an endearing write congrad's on your win. Light 7 love

Carol Sunshine Brown October 7, 2011 at 7:54 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Beatrice. Love, Carol

Beatrice Boyle October 6, 2011 at 3:36 PM Thanks all for your lovely comments. Autumn is my favorite time of year! Bea

Amber Meli October 6, 2011 at 3:15 PM Wow, that actually made me smile when I feel so down. Thank you.

Carolyn Devonshire October 6, 2011 at 2:06 PM How I love the way you describe the mature love surviving through youth, but it ssad to think of winter as dark and lonely, Beatrice. Congratulations on your first-place, first-rate poem! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick October 6, 2011 at 1:09 PM Congrats to you on your 1st place win..a lovely poem..BG

Dinda Minardi October 6, 2011 at 9:18 AM I love the last stanza. Congrats, Dinda :)

Dinda Minardi October 6, 2011 at 9:16 AM I love the last stanza. Congrats, Dinda :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2011 at 11:58 PM Congrats Beatrice on first place win with this brilliant beauty luv..

Lee Ramage October 5, 2011 at 11:20 PM Well done, lovely write. I apologize for the delay in congratulating you Beatrice but my internet has been out as well as PS. Thanks Lee