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Falling In Love - Lay

Let eyes meet, let them spark a fire Let rhythms sing to music of lyre Let heartbeats of joy write our song In moods of kisses yearned for long Let blushing cheeks welcome romance Enchanting heart's seductive dance Let winds of love ignite our flame As night, ecstatic, croons your name December 29, 2019 Placed 3rd: Lay it on me—8x8 poetry contest Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com) Sponsor: Charles Messina Placed 2nd: Strand select 6 by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/1/2020 4:32:00 PM

A loving write, Vijay :)

Robertina B.

Date: 1/21/2020 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your Splendid write.. So romantic and breathtaking, my friend! Have a blessed day..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/21/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Robertina--much appreciate.

J.R. Wren-Ingalls

Date: 1/19/2020 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Vijay! I enjoyed reading this!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/21/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thank you J.R.--much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:41:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Vijay, congratulations your win. Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2020 2:20:00 PM

Many thanks Eve.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/16/2020 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2020 2:19:00 PM

Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2020 8:28:00 AM

Very romantic, Vijay. Great flow and rhyme! Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2020 2:19:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/8/2020 12:30:00 PM

Vijay congratulations on a beautiful top win!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:38:00 AM

Much appreciate Brenda--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2020 4:51:00 PM

HOW romantic, and how did I ever miss this one you posted earlier!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2020 2:47:00 PM

You do romance very well friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:05:00 PM

Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.

Hello There

Date: 1/5/2020 1:30:00 PM

Funny to think such a lovely, flowing poem and thoughts could fit into such a structured format. You've done this beautifully, Vijay! A fave for me.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:04:00 PM

So kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 8:43:00 AM

Vijay, this is WOW - an excellent write - best wishes for the contest. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2020 1:37:00 PM

- A heavenly delight and a heart jewel, dear Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2020 4:27:00 PM

Much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Anne-Lise.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/2/2020 4:24:00 AM

So romantic are your words of love Vijay. Good luck with your exquisite poetry for I am sure it will reach top place. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2020 7:32:00 AM

You are always so very kind, Ann--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/1/2020 1:18:00 AM

I love this poem Vijay. It captures that longed for romance with such sweet tenderness. Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2020 7:43:00 AM

So very kind of you Connie--much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/31/2019 8:47:00 PM

Such a great poem, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2020 7:42:00 AM

Many thanks Janice--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/31/2019 1:03:00 AM

Beautiful entry in the contest.. An example for lay.. Good luck..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/30/2019 9:22:00 PM

Vijay, So enticing a feeling in this Lay. It's nice to find you with hands so busy writing from a light heart. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2019 8:20:00 AM

So kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/30/2019 4:13:00 PM

Beautiful poem Vijay, as for Sunshine Smile, on my end it says she has turned off comments and her soup mail is gone too. I was just concerned as to why, Since I cannot contact her, I cannot ask her, but if you can, please make sure she's fine. Thanks.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2019 11:44:00 AM

Hi Pixie--she replied--she said she will contact you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2019 8:19:00 AM

I just sent her a note. I will let you know once she replies. But I believe, all is well.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/30/2019 4:04:00 PM

"Falling In Love" and rising in beauty! The tone of your well crafted words is "enchanting the heart" of your reader and enabling a soul to ascend to a top level of artistry! An amazing rendition of your feel and gift! Dear Vijay, your work is both, cherished into my fave list and worthy of an outshining placement.. Happy New Year and warmest wishes.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Besma--always a pleasure to read your kind remarks--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE. Happy new year! Regards!!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/30/2019 10:28:00 AM

very well written my friend, should score very high

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 3:55:00 PM

Much appreciate Eve--many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2019 9:33:00 AM

Beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for 2020!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate. Best wishes for the new year.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/30/2019 9:23:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Vijay. Falling in love....sparked off by just one deep look! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Paul--hope you are doing well--much appreciate. Best wishes for the new year. Regards.

Joseph May

Date: 12/30/2019 7:47:00 AM

Well rendered Vijay, GL in the Contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 3:52:00 PM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/30/2019 7:25:00 AM

Dear Vijay, nice to read your poetry once again. Yes my story is real, it did happen when I turned 44 and yes I do have photos of the happy occasion. But I cannot post photos as I am not a member, thank you for loving my work, and supported me. xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 3:52:00 PM

So glad the ending of the story was positive--much appreciate your comments my friend. All the best in new year!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/30/2019 6:20:00 AM

A symphony of heart's feelings that expresses the falling in love for each-other in a powerful romantic way! Marvelously written dear, Vijay! Good luck my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2019 7:09:00 AM

So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks, Demetrios.