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Falling Ill

Subtle yet serious, all the while thinking I slipped into depression. I did not buy a ticket through these gates nor did I see them. My thoughts are thinking my imagination into life or my perception is real. Lower than the bottom is how I feel. Trespassing insanity or trespassing in sanity. I take pills to correct a chemical imbalance. Diagnostic devestation and a reprise visit Misconceptual visits with ones self. Relaying information through the gateways and further south Fits of rage left me sullen and weary. I slept through both day and night. Only to awake in confusion with the new day. Nothing short of good in a false reality is where my time stood still All now corrected by a little pill.

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Date: 12/31/2010 2:53:00 PM
Captured the pain of depression--a difficult journey. Keep on writing. Karen
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