Falling for You

Yesterday, Lady Ant met Sir Fly
atop a high wall somewhere nearby.
Can you fly? Said the fly;
You should give it a try.
So she jumped; what a sad way to die!
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George Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Falling off the high hill, lady ant met with a sudden death. I think I should direct some lady ants to the fly. Between my computer keys there are ants as I munch some sweets, sitting beside my computer. Lover your limerick.
Miller Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 8:58 AM
thank you Valsa
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 10:24 PM
Ha. A humpty Dumpty ant!
Miller Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Indeed!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 9:28 AM
What a fun Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh. Yes, what a sad way to die. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Happy Spring Blessings To You.........
Miller Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Paula
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