Falling Foliage


It is Autumn and foliage is falling
Crisp, brittle and dry that make a crunch-crunch sound
Floating down in clusters, to trees they're calling
Not to let them go, but they have touched the ground

Orange, brown and yellow hues spread everywhere
Endless sweeping wind swishes those leaves around 
A scrunchy scent permeates the Harvest air
Crushed under feet, powdery residue found

Bare brown branches stick out sore midst the landscape
Trees wish to change their fashion trends this season
They have to wait some time before they can drape
In pristine white, and 'no leaves' is the reason



17th December 2022


For Eve Roper's "Still Life Autumn Scene" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Falling Foliage" is a colorful write. The best time of the year for me. Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
Alex Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:28 PM
It's a very beautiful work. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Jo, you set a wonderful scene. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Lovely still life imagery, dear. Thanks for your visit to my poetry.
La France Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Jo, a beautiful poem, I love the scene you created, best of luck, blessings
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Crisp brittle .... crunch - crunch sound..... A crunchy scent ..... Nice narration Enjoyed each line . Blessings
Pandit Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 5:39 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn, Jo. Much enjoyed.
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 2:31 AM
My favourite season Jo, you captured it well in your verse. Best of luck in the contest and hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Tom
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