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Falling Foliage

It is Autumn and foliage is falling Crisp, brittle and dry that make a crunch-crunch sound Floating down in clusters, to trees they're calling Not to let them go, but they have touched the ground Orange, brown and yellow hues spread everywhere Endless sweeping wind swishes those leaves around A scrunchy scent permeates the Harvest air Crushed under feet, powdery residue found Bare brown branches stick out sore midst the landscape Trees wish to change their fashion trends this season They have to wait some time before they can drape In pristine white, and 'no leaves' is the reason 17th December 2022 For Eve Roper's "Still Life Autumn Scene" contest

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Date: 12/29/2022 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Falling Foliage" is a colorful write. The best time of the year for me. Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:28:00 PM
It's a very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:56:00 PM
Jo, you set a wonderful scene. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Date: 12/18/2022 4:50:00 PM
Lovely still life imagery, dear. Thanks for your visit to my poetry.
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Date: 12/18/2022 12:09:00 PM
Jo, a beautiful poem, I love the scene you created, best of luck, blessings
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Date: 12/18/2022 5:41:00 AM
Crisp brittle .... crunch - crunch sound..... A crunchy scent ..... Nice narration Enjoyed each line . Blessings
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Date: 12/17/2022 5:39:00 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn, Jo. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 12/17/2022 2:31:00 AM
My favourite season Jo, you captured it well in your verse. Best of luck in the contest and hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Tom
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