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Falling, Falling

I catch a soft murmur, in my night hallucination; placid words and articulation of Mom, as if standing within my grasp. I want this so much, I hold no angst, no horror or panic; my mind is ajar, and wildly staring, toward a ghost, a contour- a shadow familiar; I so want my Mom. My vision murmurs, calm and still my darling, and I am falling, falling into a hush; to grasp this soft murmur, again, again and again . . . . _______________________ July 13, 2020 Poetry/Lipogram/Verse/Falling, Falling Copyright Protected,ID 20-1268-122-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the PREMIER contest, Lipogram sponsor, Emile Pinet Second Place

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:06:00 PM

Those endearing emotions last forever. Your muse is soothing and heartfelt at the same time Constance. Congratulations on your win! Blessings and love :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:03:00 PM

Aditi, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/27/2020 7:35:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of my Mom. God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Beata, thanks so much for the congrats, my mom is with me every moment _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2020 2:08:00 PM

such an emotional piece Constance, she will always be in your heart:-) many congrats on your win :-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Jan, always in my heart, thanks for the congrats _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2020 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations, Constance! Enjoyed.

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the congratulatins _Constance

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/27/2020 11:40:00 AM

Very nice write for a winning position, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:05:00 PM

Jenna, thanks for the compliment _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2020 11:23:00 AM

Great job on this form, Constance. Wasn't sure what Emile wanted so I didn't enter. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:05:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2020 9:01:00 AM

Even when our mom's have left us, they never really leave us. I find myself quoting my mom all the time and dreaming about her - falling, falling falling a great visual! Congratulations on your second place, Constance! Blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:06:00 PM

Sam, me too, I have to stop myself sometimes but mom is always in my heart, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/27/2020 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations Constance! Your poem earned "Second" in my contest, due to the technical demands of this form it was a very difficult contest to judge, but your emotional poem caught my eye and touched my heart. Well done my friend, Emile.

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:07:00 PM

Emile, thank you for another inspiring contest, I always enjoy your contests and am thrilled with my placement _Constance

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/14/2020 1:31:00 AM

I catch a soft murmur.. So beautifully written Constance.. An emotional write.. Good luck..

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2020 3:51:00 AM

Jenish, thanks for the compliment on my poem, yes emotional _Constance

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/13/2020 4:54:00 PM

Your poem is heartwrenching! You never outgrow your longing for your Mom.

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2020 3:52:00 AM

Sunlite, thanks for visiting and the compassion, no I will never let go of my mom, she is safe in my heart _Constance