Falling Elm Leaves

Falling Leaves Specific to the Elm 

Long before Fall, Elm trees thin their leaves,
And Elm trees are the ones we have plenty of.
Tiny little ovals turn tan and gold and green and drifting,
Riding on hair and clothes to fall off on just gleaming floors.
Not a surprise they cling to the mouth, on your little pet's fur,
They seem to dance a graceful waltz with joy a kick and a swirl.
Then at twilight, sweet breezes usually lie,
And wait to be stirred tomorrow, 
When householders sweep with repetitive dismay,
But wouldn't have it another way.
Sweeping, sweeping, into gold and green piles,
Where home from school, little children play.
Where heaven is to wallow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/3/2019 8:18:00 AM
Choreography of fallen leaves so artistically displayed dearest, Sunlite
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/3/2019 10:41:00 AM
How wonderful to hear from you! Thank you for commenting.
Date: 11/3/2019 2:44:00 AM
I love leaves falling... all part of Autumn, my favorite season of them all. Love your poem, dear friend. Blessings, Gina
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/3/2019 10:41:00 AM
Autumn is a kind season, I think. Thank you, Regina.
Date: 11/2/2019 4:16:00 PM
- I can see this with my own eyes ... you've described it with beautiful lines, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/3/2019 10:43:00 AM
That is a really great compliment, Sunshine. Thank you.
Date: 11/2/2019 12:28:00 PM
Loving the imagery displayed in this piece of gem...I love when poetry speaks to me such as this...thank you!! INK
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Date: 11/2/2019 12:09:00 PM
i love this...i can relate, except for me it's on my bus floor and no matter how often i sweep those leaves are everywhere... great write... a wonderful poem for the season... :) hugs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/3/2019 10:45:00 AM
Oh, yes, I remember bus floors. Thank you, Sandra!
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