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Falling

I will remember the leaping seas, the sloping smile of the shore. As emerging naked, the moon lit your lines and curves, moved, the stone of my heart cracked I felt a fear that my pages were to be rewritten, I grasped my breast, and the wind charged as the sky fell I will forever remember the crack and fall, until my eternal kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/25/2014 5:06:00 PM
Deep and powerful...such beautiful imagery! intense write, Jayne! // paul
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Date: 3/4/2014 6:01:00 AM
Sighs...such beauty in one poem. I loved this one from you Jayne.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Mustapha I am so happy you liked it love Jayne x
Date: 2/25/2014 7:22:00 PM
This is just lovely Jayne .... Hugs Tin
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/28/2014 9:23:00 AM
hehe thanks *Tin* sorry couldn't help myself very happy you liked it love Jayne x
Date: 2/25/2014 4:48:00 PM
Hi Jayne, Great imagery here and a beautiful poem. Falling!!!!!!!!! Kevin
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/28/2014 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Kevin I am glad you liked it love Jayne x

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