falling

Like the first snow,
Like the rain
Like the dead red leaves of autumn
Everything is gracefully falling
Into place

The way I did things before is gone 
The character that did them is gone, too
I blow her away like autumn leaves
I cast her into the air like softest snow
I let her heaviness flow like water
Seeping into every in-between
Rippling, touching everything
I laugh as I go

Mother Moon whispers to me
That I am her daughter
And she has prepared a place for me
Upon her ivory shores
Where I can gaze in perfect view
At our father, Great Sun
And I’ll soak in every detail
As if the battle’s already won

The trees stand still and tall
Still, they are falling
They are shedding their old layers
They are girding their waists with ringlets, they are
Shaving bald their heads, they are
Preparing for the bare, still night of winter
To adorn themselves at dawn
The trees are standing still

Like the first snow, I am softly falling
Into the arms of grace
Like the trees, I am silently rising
Stretching out my unused wings
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Agustin Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 11:29 AM
There can be no better place to fall than into the arms of Grace. Lovely thoughts you have so gently written, Jane.
Parker Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 8:25 AM
magical, dear poet, with a feeling of mystical,
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