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Fallen Star 2 (Slam)

A angels rebirth/ A fallen star crashing to earth/ Just a small dent in a huge planet/ Find the devil now! He's the baby-bandit? He snatched up the babe and ran./ He's out to train this child to be the Iceman!/ The fallen star was released into the wild./ So much suffering for such a small child!/ The pain was digested,/ even after he was molested./ Leaving him utterly confused./ He even swelled being physically abused!/ Whether or not it was fate,/ He's learned to hate./ It may be too late,/ to ever find his soulmate./ We watch the fallen star arise./ He is definately streetwise./ Looking to fight and burglarize./ Don't you dare look him in the eyes./ He'll surely hypnotize/ and leave you paralized./ He does what he must/ to adjust/ and survive./ He's determined to stay alive! The fallen star/ looks afar./ A crime/ is time,/ and so he buries his grief,/ but to his relief,/ He begins to slowly heal!/ He allows God to take the wheel./ So he steals/ the batmobile and drives away!/ Never again to go astray./ The fallen star/ uses a pen as his scimitar/ to destroy his enemies./ Each line puts a victim on their knees,/ leaving them to be amputees!/ He sets out/ with a shout/ to bring Audrey back from the dead./ A new life ahead,/ and so much more./ A fallen star causing a poetic war!/ * To Audrey with so much love...I want a part 3! You and me will make a melody!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 9:50:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Jimmy. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:36:00 PM
You two make a sweet melody indeed,in your poems--Charma
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:51:00 PM
Hi Jimmy, This is a beautiful poem I'm sure it meant a lot to Audrey! Truly enjoyed it. Hey my friend, did you get your soup mail. I feel so bad, I got return to sender on your card I sent. I emailed Marty, he gave me same PO address as I had mailed. Not sure what to do. I will remail as soon as I can. So sorry hun, I was really looking forward to you getting it in time for Christmas. hugs, love light patty
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:45:00 PM
Thanks for writing this for me, my Jimmy! Though I haven't tried writing "Slam", I will take the challenge!! Good job as usual! Peace and much love to you too! Audrey
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