Fallen Star 2 (Slam)

A angels rebirth/ A fallen star crashing to earth/ Just a small dent in a huge planet/  Find 
the devil now!  He's the baby-bandit?  He snatched up the babe and ran./  He's out to train 
this child to be the Iceman!/
       The fallen star was released into the wild./ So much suffering for such a small child!/  
The pain was digested,/ even after he was molested./  Leaving him utterly confused./  He 
even swelled being physically abused!/  Whether or not it was fate,/ He's learned to hate./  It 
may be too late,/ to ever find his soulmate./
       We watch the fallen star arise./  He is definately streetwise./  Looking to fight and 
burglarize./  Don't you dare look him in the eyes./  He'll surely hypnotize/ and leave you 
paralized./  He does what he must/ to adjust/ and survive./  He's determined to stay alive!
       The fallen star/ looks afar./  A crime/ is time,/ and so he buries his grief,/ but to his 
relief,/ He begins to slowly heal!/  He allows God to take the wheel./  So he steals/ the 
batmobile and drives away!/  Never again to go astray./
       The fallen star/ uses a pen as his scimitar/ to destroy his enemies./  Each line puts a 
victim on their knees,/ leaving them to be amputees!/  He sets out/ with a shout/ to bring 
Audrey back from the dead./  A new life ahead,/ and so much more./  A fallen star causing a 
poetic war!/


* To Audrey with so much love...I want a part 3!  You and me will make a melody!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/30/2009 9:50:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Jimmy. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:36:00 PM
You two make a sweet melody indeed,in your poems--Charma
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:51:00 PM
Hi Jimmy, This is a beautiful poem I'm sure it meant a lot to Audrey! Truly enjoyed it. Hey my friend, did you get your soup mail. I feel so bad, I got return to sender on your card I sent. I emailed Marty, he gave me same PO address as I had mailed. Not sure what to do. I will remail as soon as I can. So sorry hun, I was really looking forward to you getting it in time for Christmas. hugs, love light patty
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:45:00 PM
Thanks for writing this for me, my Jimmy! Though I haven't tried writing "Slam", I will take the challenge!! Good job as usual! Peace and much love to you too! Audrey
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