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This one was written for a special friend who has a thing about stars:)

If a star fell down to earth What would a fallen star be worth? For some look silver in the sky While some look gold to the naked eye. Surely it would break or bust. Could there be value in it's dust? I doubt that it would be for sale A broken star that's lost it's tail I guess it might be worth a look Or a poem inside a children's book. Then some might say a million-ish But to me... it's only worth one wish. Daniel Turner

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/23/2025 7:52:00 AM

Lovely! May all your wishes come true.

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/24/2025 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Eileen. Great to see you again. I hope all is well with you and yours:)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/3/2025 7:09:00 PM

I do believe, ' a broken star that's lost it's tail ' is still worth a million and one wishes. There's something magical about the stars, the way the moon shares its glow with everyone down below. I love everything about the night sky. :) I'm sure your friend will love what you've written. My best to you, Daniel. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 5/11/2025 5:32:00 AM

Dan If it falls do you still get the wish?

Jan Allison

Date: 3/25/2025 10:45:00 AM

such a touching poem DT I hope your special friend loves it as much as i do:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/19/2025 10:18:00 AM

This is wonderful, Daniel! I hope your friend was touched by it, too…

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/16/2025 1:14:00 AM

Check soup mail The poem - ah man, I teared up. You are a writer of poems that often amaze me, not just in style and content, but because you can write soft, tender and emotional poems that are opposite of the anti-optimism you sometimes express. This is a gem. I'm sure the government would secretly see the scar disappear for dissection and study! I hope your special friend feels how special the poem is. Have I over stayed? Wanna party? Poetry Hugs ... CayCay

Arlo Parker

Date: 2/9/2025 4:58:00 PM

Clever manifestation of your craft, DT. =;o))

Len Gasun

Date: 2/7/2025 6:42:00 AM

Wow! Your friend will love this too as much as I do. I'll fave this outstanding rhyme and thank you so much. I'm extremely glad you're back my dear poet friend, Daniel. Hope everything is well with you. Thank you for sharing again your poems. I love this and I'll try to be back soon to read again from you. Thank you so much for your lovely visit too. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/1/2025 7:41:00 PM

Lovely write Daniel. I'm sure your friend was touched by this special poem, a star!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2025 2:40:00 AM

Thank you, Sandy. Its always my pleasure when you drop in. Take care young lady:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/30/2025 3:36:00 PM

Hello Daniel Turner, so nice to see you again. i am gladx that you are back. well if i came across a fallen star, I would pick it up, and put it in my pocket. Save it for a rainy day. then make a wish upon it. enjoy your evenking my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2025 4:16:00 PM

Hello Daniel, oh, okay Daniel.Thank you Daniel. The same for you. I am having a health problem with my cat. other than that life is treating me fine. Daniel enjoy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2025 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. You dont need a star to make a wish:) Always a pleasure to see you. I hope life has been treating you kindly.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/30/2025 1:06:00 AM

This is so sweet, DT:) thanks for dropping by my work, yes, I'm married now and doing very well, thank you:) was married in October 2023...am not as regular on PS as I used to be before, but write once in a while when inspiration strikes:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2025 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Joanna. I hope you're happy now:) Im sure we'll pass each other occasionally. Dont be a stranger.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2025 11:58:00 AM

- Curiosity is the seedbed for learning, Daniel ... children in particular often wonder in their quest to understand the world - A lovely poem :) - hugs

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 12:36:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise. Thank you for dropping by to read and comment. I have a 3 yr old grandson. I know:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/29/2025 11:04:00 AM

What a lovely write for your friend. I love the sky/stars. A million stars should be worth more than just one wish..... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I believe there is still a child inside of us all. Always a pleasure to see you.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2025 9:27:00 AM

To see a shooting star, then it's visit to our earth, a treasure it would be. Lovely poem my friend. The 2-inch snow only lasted for 3 days. I felt sorry for my Peanut because he is little and short little legs. Besides when it started melting the street and sidewalk turn to ice so I was afraid to fall while I walked him.

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Buddy is a 13 inch beagle so you can only imagine him in an 11 inch snow. LOL Im glad you stayed in. A fall on ice can be very painful.

Deb M

Date: 1/29/2025 5:59:00 AM

Sweet poem YM….the last line ends it perfectly! YL x

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 6:03:00 AM

Thanks Deb (YL) Always a pleasure to see you.

Tom Woody

Date: 1/29/2025 5:46:00 AM

I like your simple rhymes and cadence. This one almost feels like a nursery rhyme

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 6:42:00 AM

Thats the way I took it.

Tom Woody
Date: 1/29/2025 6:09:00 AM

It was meant as a compliment, nothing else, though some are always looking for another twist. I tell everyone I'm just a simple storyteller. You're welcome

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 5:48:00 AM

Thats what I listed it as. It was written to be one. Thanks Tom.