Get Your Premium Membership

Fallen heroes 1

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Tonytocaa Camacho.


Swollen eyes trickle of tears Swells of pride hence denied Cry me mo tears shed me mo light Shots raining out Nowhere to run nowhere to hide Ballistically speaking Blown away by projectiles Plunged deep within Multiplying seeds of corruption seeds of death Whom do we trust whom do we look up to LAPD ,NYPD Or perhaps Mayberry RFD No way Jose so she'd me mo light True true no doubt no doubt Guns and roses is the tune Let the procession begin All Mourners expected the bugle sounds Time is here So stand up Led the tabernacle in Sing sing a song sing sing Mo blues Cry me a river cry me a river Cry me a river ... over you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/15/2016 11:57:00 PM
Great write...:)
Login to Reply
Camacho Avatar
Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 2/18/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Esther these are some of them that I enjoy writing very meaningful thanks for you support..tonytocaa
Date: 5/12/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this wonderful and thought provoking poem. Truly there is nothing frustrating like not knowing who to trust when people who are tasked to protect their citizens are corrupt and irresponsible.
Login to Reply
Camacho Avatar
Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 5/12/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, BONGANI,much respect to you and your ideology and beliefs..peace..tonytocaa
Date: 3/30/2015 9:00:00 AM
Wonderful moving write, a 7. Blessings Eve
Login to Reply
Camacho Avatar
Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 3/30/2015 9:27:00 AM
Eve thanks for your faith and 7..hugs tonytocaa
Date: 3/28/2015 2:59:00 PM
Love yourwork! Read, comment & like other poets works & share yours w/our community in Puerto Rico http://www.lasalitacafe.com/poets-corner/
Login to Reply
Camacho Avatar
Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 3/29/2015 2:35:00 PM
Jessica, thank you for sharing your thoughts and enjoying my prose,I will your check your website out,palante..tonytocaa