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Fallen Foliage

Deep in Nature's woods
Battle scars of weathered life
Silently descend

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 11, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

October 10, 2011 at 7:36 PM

Descriptive winning work..Congrats..Sara

Paul Beadnall

October 10, 2011 at 3:12 PM

Congrats Carolyn with blessings from Paul.

Kash Poet

May 28, 2011 at 2:55 PM

Nice Haiku here.Seems to be a photo based.

Andrea Dietrich

April 25, 2010 at 12:02 AM

Hey, congratulations,I think I somehow missed this one. Good job, Carolyn. LUv, andrea

James Fraser

April 24, 2010 at 5:18 PM

Many congratulations on your first place in Raul's contest Carolyn. Terrific Haiku >> James

Daver Austin

April 24, 2010 at 10:12 AM

If no one is there to witness, do battle scars occur? Do they "silenty" descend? Hey! This is a mind boggler. You be Spooky. Love, Daver

Jimmy Anderson

April 24, 2010 at 9:29 AM

Congratulations on another win, Carolyn!! hugs, Jimmy

Joyce Johnson

April 24, 2010 at 9:25 AM

I searched and found this contest come and gone while I was gone and lo and behold you did indeed win with your lovely descriptive words. Joyce

Joyce Johnson

April 24, 2010 at 9:21 AM

I'm just home from several days away. Haven't found this contest but this is a winner I am sure. Thanks for your comments on Sounds of Summer. Love, Joyce

Katherine Stella

April 24, 2010 at 8:54 AM

Oh I like this congrats on well penned with beautiful imagery thos sad keep up the great work my friend and thanks a million for your kind comments also keep up the wonderful work

Cecil Hickman

April 23, 2010 at 8:14 PM

Congratulations again my friend a beautiful and well written Haiku for sure,,Great job,,,Blessings..Cecil

John Freeman

April 23, 2010 at 5:51 PM

Awesome poem Carolyn for your first place win. Congratulations my friend, Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2010 at 12:37 PM

Congrad's on your 1# win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

April 23, 2010 at 7:42 AM

A lovely win from a lovely lady!! Beautiful haiku Carolyn....congratulations on your 1st place win!! Well deserving this honor!! Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2010 at 6:20 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Kim M

April 23, 2010 at 6:17 AM

My Queen, I'm speechless as I curtsy. Your victorious kingdom is safe, while your tired army rests. ...I mean, Congratulations, Carolyn! (applauding smiles with a wink)