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Fallen Angels

fallen angels
casualties of sin
in darkness lay

losssenryu

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John Freeman

January 21, 2011 at 6:19 PM

Yes excellent job, Deb, a third I believe. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

January 21, 2011 at 6:18 PM

For a guy who ain't religious, I love writing and reading about angels. It's the Dark Side in me. Koolio Senryu Deb...:)

Carolyn Devonshire

January 21, 2011 at 3:41 PM

Quite a vivid image of the fallen angels you have painted, Deb. Excellent work with the senryu form as well as the imagery. Love, Carolyn

Christine A Kysely

January 21, 2011 at 9:36 AM

A very descriptive senryu. Good work. I love it!!! Very descriptive! Christine

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2011 at 9:18 AM

This is very good, Deb. They are indeed casualties of sin!

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 21, 2011 at 8:52 AM

The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol