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fallen angels

fallen angels casualties of sin in darkness lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 6:19:00 PM
Yes excellent job, Deb, a third I believe. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:18:00 PM
For a guy who ain't religious, I love writing and reading about angels. It's the Dark Side in me. Koolio Senryu Deb...:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:41:00 PM
Quite a vivid image of the fallen angels you have painted, Deb. Excellent work with the senryu form as well as the imagery. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:36:00 AM
A very descriptive senryu. Good work. I love it!!! Very descriptive! Christine
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:18:00 AM
This is very good, Deb. They are indeed casualties of sin!
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:52:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:25:00 AM
A very descriptive senryu. Good work.
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:54:00 AM
Intellectual write on the fallen angels with apt images, deb
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