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Fall Sunlight Sparkles

fall's sunlight sparkles
diamonds' reflections glitter..
big rigs conveyers  

On the interstate where
the angle of the sun was 
reflecting off all the cars, 
trucks, and buses..

lifehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2014 at 9:37 AM

Sara, ~~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Bl Devnath

October 16, 2013 at 10:49 AM

Nice observation realized in to beautiful haiku poem. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

October 15, 2013 at 10:21 PM

Sara, your poem dazzled up my eyes... love it...LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2013 at 6:03 PM

very interesting way to get a haiku,, sara. You are always so observant and that is very needful for this kind of poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 15, 2013 at 3:18 AM

- Beautiful moments that must be enjoyed.... well done Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Posey

October 14, 2013 at 6:59 PM

You have captured the artistry of using Japanese poetic form to portray American culture.... Great work, sweetheart..... love ya.... Jake

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

October 14, 2013 at 12:12 PM

Wonderful how you found beauty unexpectedly! You captured the moment well...love and blessings, Rhonda

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 14, 2013 at 7:43 AM

Wonderful haiku, Sara! Laconic and sweet!

Russell Sivey

October 14, 2013 at 6:49 AM

Wow, this is a tremendous insightful write my friend! You have written about such a common thing but hardly ever written about, very ingenious poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous piece this morning! What a phenomenal poem, Great Work!!