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Fall Splendour

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Sptember 20, 2023

"Fall Splendour" Poetry Contest

Sponsor; Tania Kitchin

Third Place

Summer's excitement over, veiled Fall tiptoes softly tantalizing, with aroma of golden sunshine, decoupage of leaves - cerise, tangerine, crimson-red a riot of colours on bountiful maple and playful pine! whimsical season filling hearts in euphoric delight, I see dreams of my zestful youth in soaring leaves swooshing, floating, drifting around, often fluttering, few sprawled on the ground summer's dreams weave. one last rose beaming, present final dance of a ballerina, jinias glimmering with streaks of light in golden breeze, merciless wind will soon blow away their enchanting stories, before they leave, witness fall splendour in the grandiose trees. a rare painting by nature, pageant sure to win, beauty of a fairyland, in soothing cascade of light, Autumnal grandeur softly envelopes summer's beauty Nature and it's endless gifts, behold a gorgeous sight!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2023 10:14:00 AM

That final dance of the ballerina is perfectly visualized through your words Mala. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/29/2023 2:11:00 PM

Mala, wonderful fall imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/29/2023 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. I am humbled to be placed with many talented poets.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/22/2023 3:40:00 PM

Splendid entry for the contest, Mala. You paint a magnificent picture of Autumn with your imagery and beautiful descriptions. Good Luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/25/2023 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Poet Friend in Texas. Another encouraging comment - I feel inspired to continue writing. Truly appreciate your kindness.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/20/2023 6:07:00 AM

Beautiful images of fall, Mala. Much enjoyed the colors and revelry you convey.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/20/2023 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. Your comments are much appreciated. Best wishes ~

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/20/2023 12:12:00 AM

Dear Mala this is a stunning autumn fall poem with exquisite lines. The imagery is so breathtakingly vivid that it draws the reader in to all the splendour that the gorgeous season brings. ‘decoupage of leaves - cerise, tangerine, crimson - red’ jinias glimmering with streaks of light in golden breeze’. Heavenly! So enchantingly penned and delightful. This is a clear fav for me dear Mala. Thank you. Hugs and smiles :):)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/20/2023 10:05:00 AM

Dear Christina, Thank you so much for reading my poem. This is only my humble effort, but your inspiring comments are so appreciated! And your “Fave”!! That makes me feel on cloud nine, Dear Friend! Love ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/19/2023 1:21:00 PM

Love the decoupage of leaves and the activity - soaring, swooshing, floating…

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/19/2023 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Autumn is my favourite season. Leaves really create a colourful scene of decoupage

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/19/2023 1:06:00 PM

Hello Malabika Choudhury, I think that summer in Canada is more beautiful than autumn over there, very cold north place! Enjoyed read! Yet, I saw wonderful photos of autumns and winters in Canada. Best regards and wishes, AA

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/19/2023 1:48:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem. Yes, you are right - Canada is a very cold country. But summer is wonderful, and Autumn too, until winter begins in December. Four months of winter, December to March, is very harsh. But again, Fall is spectacular in the region where I live!