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Fall Song with Joanna Daniel

Fall flourishes with flighty flair, a silent song upon the air. Melody of fading ember, all in spirit, rhythm, and timbre. In Her heart, a tenuous tune flirting with a bold maroon moon. She has not sung this song before, an unearthly, uplifting score. Morendo a niente, fades out, catching Her breath in subtle shout. Crescendo of color escapes in multidimensional shapes. Catching currents Her breath has blown, paves the path with scattered seeds sown. Her name is carved on every tree She has conceived her legacy. Dulcet, the voice of Autumn sways, Presto agitato, She plays, Leaves flutter in a rustling dance, taking part in russet romance. What sweet music tingles the trees! Baring bold birches, blows the breeze, Arias aired in harmony with woods akin bleeding honey. Enjoy Fall's vibrant banjo beats, as she raps with hued leafy sheets, whispering soft kisses and dreams, Refrains released in umber streams. Foliage tanned and tinted brown tango with harvest's golden gown, Autumnal chorus slow tingles, Join in with Her joyful jingles.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/6/2024 2:48:00 AM

Wonderful to have joined hands with you once again, Linda:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/6/2024 9:28:00 AM

You bring out the best in me my friend. So wonderful collaborating with you! :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/5/2024 9:43:00 PM

Very nice read of your "dancing" poem dear lovely Flower! Smoothed enjoyed read, have a nice day ~ AA

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/6/2024 9:27:00 AM

Hello my dear AA. Thank you for visiting again and for your sweet words. YF :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/5/2024 5:52:00 PM

Dear Linda, this is an exquisite symphony of words, creating a portrait of autumn's beauty and grace. The imagery of leaves rustling in a russet romance and foliage tangoing with harvest's golden gown is simply enchanting. I love how your mastery of language and poetic devices brings the season to life in a breathtaking melody that dances through the senses. It's a tribute to the magic of fall, celebrating its vibrant colors, gentle whispers, and rhythmic melodies. Reading your poem is like being serenaded by nature herself. - Blessings, Daniel

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/6/2024 9:26:00 AM

Joanna brings out the best Daniel. She is a very talented person. Thank you for your reflective thoughts and support. Linda :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/5/2024 5:19:00 PM

a wonderful collaboration between you tow. This poem was a delight to read with its outstanding imagery and smooth-flowing rhyme scheme. Loved this alliterative line: Baring bold birches, blows the breeze I also liked these words: In Her heart, a tenuous tune flirting with a bold maroon moon. Indeed the moon is sometimes maroon! Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/6/2024 9:25:00 AM

Many thanks my dear friend Sara. Joanna is a delightful partner-in-poem. You are always so supportive and positive. Thank you! :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/5/2024 3:42:00 PM

"whispering soft kisses and dreams, Refrains released in umber streams." Lovely poetry my friend. A joy to read. Thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/5/2024 4:15:00 PM

You are welcome and thank you Joe. Joanna is a marvel with imagery. It is always fun to collaborate with her. Many thanks for the read and comments. :)