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fall night hiku

under an endless
carousal of stars -
bright leaves ride the wind

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/3/2025 6:59:00 AM

This feels like a little snapshot of autumn magic. I could see the stars and feel the breeze—so simply beautiful!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/2/2025 10:04:00 AM

Hey Andrea, I am glad I came here to read this poem. It's beautiful and peaceful. Have a good day friend

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/31/2025 4:32:00 PM

Wow, this is incredible, so lovely! Your haiku is breathtaking, I love it!

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/31/2025 3:40:00 PM

With the stifling heat we have daily, what you have described here would be a welcome change.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2025 12:34:00 PM

This one grabbed my attention and carried me into fall. Looking forward to those leaves turning and the air getting crisp. Thanks for sharing your creation. Sara K

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/31/2025 11:43:00 AM

Very lovely imagery, Andrea -- a couple beers, they spin even more wildly, my experience.... Stars were made for poetry, I think. Enjoyed very much. A needed escape.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 5:33:00 AM

You're so adept at writing these thrilling imaginative haiku. Hugs.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2025 9:53:00 PM

Gorgeous haiku!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 9:39:00 PM

soft and gentle Haiku, Andrea, very pleasant to read, my friend. Bill

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 7/30/2025 8:47:00 PM

The beauty of the starry night nicely captured.Like it

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2025 3:29:00 PM

Ooh…pretty! I appreciate a straight up haiku…I will shape it up only if I can see a reason. There are some good ones and some forced just like rhymes. Every one of your lines is beautiful! Fave!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2025 2:05:00 PM

What a lovely write you have here. I will ride the carousal. The leaves will ride the wind. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/30/2025 10:05:00 AM

Lovely! Very romantic imagery.