fall night hiku

under an endless carousal of stars - bright leaves ride the wind

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 5:33:00 AM

You're so adept at writing these thrilling imaginative haiku. Hugs.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2025 9:53:00 PM

Gorgeous haiku!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 9:39:00 PM

soft and gentle Haiku, Andrea, very pleasant to read, my friend. Bill

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 7/30/2025 8:47:00 PM

The beauty of the starry night nicely captured.Like it

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2025 3:29:00 PM

Ooh…pretty! I appreciate a straight up haiku…I will shape it up only if I can see a reason. There are some good ones and some forced just like rhymes. Every one of your lines is beautiful! Fave!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2025 2:05:00 PM

What a lovely write you have here. I will ride the carousal. The leaves will ride the wind. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/30/2025 10:05:00 AM

Lovely! Very romantic imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2025 7:54:00 AM

- ... "ride the wind" ... great written, Andrea :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs