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fall night hiku

under an endless
carousal of stars -
bright leaves ride the wind

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Rowena Velasco

August 3, 2025 at 6:59 AM

This feels like a little snapshot of autumn magic. I could see the stars and feel the breeze—so simply beautiful!

Paghunda Zahid

August 2, 2025 at 10:04 AM

Hey Andrea, I am glad I came here to read this poem. It's beautiful and peaceful. Have a good day friend

Bj Legros Kelley

July 31, 2025 at 4:32 PM

Wow, this is incredible, so lovely! Your haiku is breathtaking, I love it!

Robert Pettit

July 31, 2025 at 3:40 PM

With the stifling heat we have daily, what you have described here would be a welcome change.

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2025 at 12:34 PM

This one grabbed my attention and carried me into fall. Looking forward to those leaves turning and the air getting crisp. Thanks for sharing your creation. Sara K

Joseph P. DiMino

July 31, 2025 at 11:43 AM

Very lovely imagery, Andrea -- a couple beers, they spin even more wildly, my experience.... Stars were made for poetry, I think. Enjoyed very much. A needed escape.

Victor Buhagiar

July 31, 2025 at 5:33 AM

You're so adept at writing these thrilling imaginative haiku. Hugs.

Paige Hind

July 30, 2025 at 9:53 PM

Gorgeous haiku!

Bill Baker

July 30, 2025 at 9:39 PM

soft and gentle Haiku, Andrea, very pleasant to read, my friend. Bill

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

July 30, 2025 at 8:47 PM

The beauty of the starry night nicely captured.Like it

Kim Rodrigues

July 30, 2025 at 3:29 PM

Ooh…pretty! I appreciate a straight up haiku…I will shape it up only if I can see a reason. There are some good ones and some forced just like rhymes. Every one of your lines is beautiful! Fave!

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2025 at 2:05 PM

What a lovely write you have here. I will ride the carousal. The leaves will ride the wind. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............