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Fall Memories

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Was inspired by this form and picture and tried to give it one more shot!!

Empty swing makes me sad Wooden wing once was glad Long ago, you swung there Children grow, now elsewhere Golden Fall, leaves scatter Tears recall kids’ chatter 08.11.2021 Form: The Essence - 6 lines, 6 syllables, internal and end rhyme For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Poem No. 19" contest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 4:48:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2021 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful rhyme write. Glad you gave it one more shot. Have a blessed day.................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/4/2021 11:47:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this lovely piece, Jo. Janice

Gary Radice

Date: 9/4/2021 11:03:00 AM

The beautiful image has been the basis for some great poems here at Poetry Soup. Your poem, Jo, speaks to me of time, its passing, loss and the wonderful but poignant memories that you hold. I really liked the metaphor of leaves scattering. Congratulations & Cheers - Gary

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2021 9:53:00 AM

I see this form from another contest is appearing in Line's contest with other winners. It is a good idea to submit this type of verse. It fits pefectly with what Line likes!! I love it! Congrats on the win.