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The sun has sunk the moon was nearing lumber smoke tarpaulin vermillion shine touch our hearts shades of strain exhaust the space as the aroma of harvest time rejuvenate your hentai I could feel the freshness under my feet a fantastic breeze blows over us my heart is shaking while leaping through a leaf pile all leaves are wilfully dropped gotten from a glorious golden tree like the blush on your beam this bold course has a story behind it daylight vanishes from sight like billows of porpoises raging the skies glossy tip of fresh grass, variety blurs to maroon same as the popping of consuming wood, my chimney will illuminate soon tree after tree, the woods develop With a solid hint of self-esteem dusky red like polished lips maybe orange is God's most tasty gift each branch is trickling with walnuts the air is loaded up with the sound of speedsters the owl cuddles up to the coat same as a honey bee resting in its hive we wander this road hand in hand the seasons alter before my eyes the views are broad and the atmosphere is serene thank God for the warmth of September we need to tidy up the wreck.
5th place contest winner Written: September 16, 2022 Fall Flavors Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh Theme: Jumping in a pile of leaves

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Date: 10/24/2022 11:28:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously feel how is it to "jump in a pile of leaves" with delight since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:25:00 AM
What a colorful picture of this beautiful season. I love the sense of coziness as the harvest is gathered and summer's creatures start to hibernate in hives and dens. Your last line is just delightful! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of the season to you!
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Hi Lasaad. This is so beautifully written. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 9/17/2022 2:17:00 AM
One cannot but admire your magnificent poetry. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/17/2022 12:08:00 AM
Oh, this is so good, Lasaad, the colourful expression, the depth of poetry superb, Good luck in contest.
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