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Fall Into Winter

FALL INTO WINTER The ducks lace the water's edge, like ruffles on a skirt. Back-lit leaves in sunset, red and purple, fall cold upon the dirt. The air so soft, that kisses gently, against our summer skin. Tawny heads and knowing eyes, that autumn's settled in. The jack-o'-lanterns' abandoned lights, with contorted, spoiled faces. They set our closing spirits up, to tuck us in our places. The smoke now swirls from chimney tops, as early is the eve. The orange and yellow candles dance, as summer takes her leave. Upon the hilly golden knoll, an old barn creaks and sways. Though paint and nails have fixed it's wounds, it's seen some better days. At night the feathered frost appears, and lies upon our stoop. The stars conspire, in comet ice, in tails that loop-de-loop. As we sleep like kings and queens, inside our downy beds, The autumn's crisp night, nudging brings, a single silver thread. By Edlynn Nau

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/23/2017 1:49:00 AM
the flow of this poem is spectacular.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 10/23/2017 8:24:00 PM
Why thank you so much! It is the music I get to hear occasionally!
Date: 5/30/2016 3:15:00 AM
This magnificent poem blooms with more than just beautiful imagery, it makes feelings come alive with a depth not seen in too many poems here. I marvel at your writing skills and look forward to reading more! Cheers, Connie 7+ ; )
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Date: 10/20/2015 7:50:00 AM
Your exceptional talent flows in every poem you gift us with! Another gem and a pleasure to read this fine morn! A7
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 10/20/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments Robert. It's so funny that this poem was skipped over for Tea with Aliens, Things with Strings & The Family for the longest time. It was somehow discovered this summer. It's rather traditional but then, we cannot ignore the beauty & fun of Earth's changing seasons.
Date: 8/31/2015 6:59:00 AM
i enjoyed this much, truly beautiful ... CayCay
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/31/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you CayCay. This one took about 5 rewrites and tons of tweaks so, I'm pleased you enjoyed a polished edit. I'm not going to post as many as all of you. I write as much but, I won't post anything that hasn't simmered and gone through rewrites as I always end up seeing something wrong. Thank you always for your encouragement CayCay!
Date: 8/27/2015 9:53:00 PM
Beautiful and flows well. Edlynn, I'm pleased to read how winter nodes the canvas... Awesome poem... REALLY... LINDA
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/27/2015 11:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and refections. I want to read more of yours. I'm trying to get a routine down here. I started reading yours & got waylaid by "the things to do" in everyday life. I think I see a clearing though & will be by to read more. This is a delightful way to get to read poetry every day! Loving it! Again, thanks you for taking the time. Your Golden!
Date: 8/26/2015 1:11:00 PM
- Nature's beautiful autumn colors, really beautiful - But, it also means goodbye to summer and it always makes me a little sad - Thanks for this really great poem, I enjoy reading it Edlynn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/26/2015 1:48:00 PM
Ha! Anne Lise: Try my poem "Spring into Summer"! That will take away your sadness for the loss of summer. It celebrates Spring but ends with summer coming. I'm always glad when Fall comes. Our summers are long and hot & Fall is a pleasure! THANK YOU so much for your comments. I will be by to read more of yours.
Date: 8/26/2015 12:50:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. :) You captured the essence of autumn so well. I loved the big about the barn have it's wounds fixed. Great write.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/26/2015 1:04:00 PM
Tank you so much Eileen. It appears that that old barn & sleeping like kings and queens are the images that stick the most. It is fun to see which of the pictures reach out, the most often, or are in our common experience. Thanks for allowing me to Share!
Date: 8/26/2015 12:52:00 AM
wow though paint and nails have fixed it's wounds,it's seen some better days. This is a great well thought of description that deserves praise. Describing the barn. An original. One of my favorite descriptions of all time. Congratulations I give this poem a 10.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/26/2015 2:01:00 AM
Michael...your praise is so high and made my eyes leak! Thank you for reading this and your extremely thoughtful words. It is fun to paint with words and I'm so pleased you saw the barn with me! I live in a beautiful place!
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/26/2015 12:53:00 AM
Great work Edlynn I will make time to read the rest of your poetry...
Date: 8/25/2015 8:21:00 PM
Beautiful write Edlynn ....An enjoyable read....
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/25/2015 9:11:00 PM
Well Joseph we both have a deep love for nature...right? Seems a very ritualistic requirement of poets, to pay tribute to the changing seasons.
Date: 8/25/2015 11:18:00 AM
Lovely! ... and chilling. I can feel it in the air.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/25/2015 12:37:00 PM
Our Falls are just beautiful but winter can be chilling. We NEED RAIN!
Date: 8/24/2015 4:12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and lovingly penned, Marked this as a favourite. Love the images and storyline. Kind regards, Ian
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/24/2015 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Ian! I got a Favorite at last!? People seem to like this more than Spring into summer! Do you see anything I should tweak? Thanks for dropping in and reading!
Date: 8/23/2015 2:02:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL! I love rhyming poems contain- ing colorful figurative language. Yours certainly fits this description. Janice
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/23/2015 2:38:00 PM
HAAA! I just held the pen and someone wiggled my fingers! THANK YOU! Your words are very kind!

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