Andrea Dietrich Poet Free verse

Fall Into Fall

memories sweetly

swirling like cotton candy -

let them melt away

in Indian summer’s gleam

succumbing to fall’s new flavors


Sept. 13, 2019
For Brian Strand's  the 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(33) any theme any form' Poetry Contest

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Sandra Adams September 25, 2019 at 6:56 PM back to say congratulations my friend...beautiful write! hugs :)

Heather Crismond September 24, 2019 at 9:56 PM That was beautiful. I love that line "memories swirling like cotton candy" fantastic imagery. Though now I'm really hungry for cotton candy;)

Suzanne Delaney September 24, 2019 at 5:51 PM Pretty images. How I love this season. Congratulations on your 1st place win. SuZ

Connie Marcum Wong September 24, 2019 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your First Placement with this Tanka that delights! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2019 at 12:51 PM - Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne September 24, 2019 at 11:44 AM so pleased to see this was a winner - just love it

Constance La France September 24, 2019 at 10:29 AM Andrea congratulations on your win with this excellent poem!

Gershon Wolf September 23, 2019 at 8:14 PM So many wonderful images in five short lines. Congrats on your win in Chantelle's contest, Andrea! Best wishes, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee September 23, 2019 at 1:07 PM I love to succumb to falls new flavors...congrats on first place win.

Probir Gupta September 23, 2019 at 5:58 AM Beautifully pithy, Andrea ... Imagery to enjoy ... Congratulations on the nice placement ...

Brenda Chiri September 23, 2019 at 1:22 AM Andrea congrats on your win!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 23, 2019 at 12:08 AM This is lovely. Congratulations on your winning piece. Blessings to you

Matthew Anish September 15, 2019 at 5:55 PM Sweet poetry for a sweet Indian summer. Hope we get one this year! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Caren Krutsinger September 15, 2019 at 8:41 AM I like how this one made me want to fall into fall.

Judy Ball September 14, 2019 at 12:57 PM Beautiful Andrea. I love the colors of Fall. Great job . God Bless, JB

Sandra Adams September 13, 2019 at 8:41 PM falls colors are beautiful but i could do without the cooler air...lovely poem :) hugs

Panagiota Romios September 13, 2019 at 7:20 PM Really a colorful piem that displays your poetic finessse! Panagiota

Connie Marcum Wong September 13, 2019 at 4:03 PM Yummy! Fall colors amaze. I wish we had the four seasons here in Hawaii. I love this Tanka Andrea! : ) xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire September 13, 2019 at 12:34 PM Oooh, I love thinking of fall as having "flavors." Awesome tanka, Andrea. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Sending winning wishes your way. Hugs, carolyn

Robert Johnson September 13, 2019 at 8:14 AM I've fallen and I can't get up. :)

Vijay Pandit September 13, 2019 at 7:53 AM Wonderful flow and tone, Andrea--all the best.

Brenda Chiri September 13, 2019 at 7:50 AM This was perfect for the contest Andrea! You got it down just right! I like the use of cotton candy!;)

Chris Green September 13, 2019 at 7:28 AM This was beautiful Andrea. Light and breezy and fun to read. Best wishes in the contest

Regina Mcintosh September 13, 2019 at 4:51 AM I enjoyed this one. Pretty and I wish you the best. Blessings