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Fall Into Fall

memories sweetly swirling like cotton candy - let them melt away in Indian summer’s gleam succumbing to fall’s new flavors Sept. 13, 2019 For Brian Strand's the 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(33) any theme any form' Poetry Contest

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Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2019 6:56:00 PM

back to say congratulations my friend...beautiful write! hugs :)

Heather Crismond

Date: 9/24/2019 9:56:00 PM

That was beautiful. I love that line "memories swirling like cotton candy" fantastic imagery. Though now I'm really hungry for cotton candy;)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/24/2019 5:51:00 PM

Pretty images. How I love this season. Congratulations on your 1st place win. SuZ

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/24/2019 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your First Placement with this Tanka that delights! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2019 12:51:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2019 11:44:00 AM

so pleased to see this was a winner - just love it

Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2019 10:29:00 AM

Andrea congratulations on your win with this excellent poem!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/23/2019 8:14:00 PM

So many wonderful images in five short lines. Congrats on your win in Chantelle's contest, Andrea! Best wishes, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/23/2019 1:07:00 PM

I love to succumb to falls new flavors...congrats on first place win.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/23/2019 5:58:00 AM

Beautifully pithy, Andrea ... Imagery to enjoy ... Congratulations on the nice placement ...

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/23/2019 1:22:00 AM

Andrea congrats on your win!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/23/2019 12:08:00 AM

This is lovely. Congratulations on your winning piece. Blessings to you

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/15/2019 5:55:00 PM

Sweet poetry for a sweet Indian summer. Hope we get one this year! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/15/2019 8:41:00 AM

I like how this one made me want to fall into fall.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/14/2019 12:57:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea. I love the colors of Fall. Great job . God Bless, JB

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/13/2019 8:41:00 PM

falls colors are beautiful but i could do without the cooler air...lovely poem :) hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/13/2019 7:20:00 PM

Really a colorful piem that displays your poetic finessse! Panagiota

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/13/2019 4:03:00 PM

Yummy! Fall colors amaze. I wish we had the four seasons here in Hawaii. I love this Tanka Andrea! : ) xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2019 12:34:00 PM

Oooh, I love thinking of fall as having "flavors." Awesome tanka, Andrea. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Sending winning wishes your way. Hugs, carolyn