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fall inside winter

My turnover, leafy cheek saw and salvaged
From Autumn's remains— this Winter's surgery,
White stitchery for washed-out color; dead cells...
               ...nip bright for scars on

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/20/2024 5:51:00 AM

Love the “Winter’s surgery” and “White stitchery for washed-out color.” The sapphic allows for such magical imagery! Hugs! Love your kind soul!

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 12/13/2023 7:00:00 AM

I love to smile! The gifts you possess are truly inspired! "From Autumn's remains— this Winter's surgery, White stitchery for washed-out color" this made my eyes swoon :) A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2023 6:18:00 AM

Your imagery is truly exquisite, while the metaphor is nothing short of brilliant. The mastery with which this short form is executed is truly well, Paige

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2023 1:54:00 AM

Nice imagery.. great metaphor.. you did this short form very well..

Ink Empress

Date: 11/21/2023 1:04:00 AM

White stitchery! Definitely something iv never read in anyones winter poem, how clever and imaginative of you! I hav never tried this form but yours flows so well with creative imagery. Its always a pleasure reading you and thank you for leaving such heartwarming messages under comments, you are truly a gem. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2023 11:16:00 PM

This is sure a cool sapphic stanza

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/19/2023 5:31:00 PM

i love the winter surgery, this is a subtle poetry for seasons upcoming, really beautiful poet have a sweet day

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/19/2023 10:59:00 AM

With expert finesse and a touch of mastery, Paige, you skillfully navigated the intricacies of your craft. Your remarkable resourcefulness was truly commendable.