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Fall Hiku

maple trees blaze red geese soar southward overhead . . . October’s rising

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Date: 10/11/2023 10:56:00 AM
Absolutely love this one. Awesome write. God bless you and Congrats, Love, Gina
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Date: 10/11/2023 12:36:00 AM
Congrats on a win!
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Date: 10/11/2023 12:07:00 AM
Another good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/10/2023 2:09:00 PM
Yup!! It is almost half over. Halloween is on its way. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/10/2023 10:08:00 AM
so nicely written, bravo andrea
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Date: 10/10/2023 1:34:00 AM
Perfect haiku. I love maple trees. Blessings
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:03:00 PM
I love the way that so few words can paint such a perfect picture in my mind. Andy you have out done yourself kudos and a 7 hugs Shadow
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:41:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:12:00 PM
a beautiful Haiku, Andrea...indeed October is rising here in Texas...cooler temps at last. Enjoy your October evening, Sara
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:37:00 PM
Andrea, love it, a beautiful one.
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:10:00 PM
I love maple trees and this write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:48:00 AM
Very lovely, Andrea!
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