Fall Fashion


red resplendent rage
fall undresses verdant trees ~
sunset ripe pumpkins

autumnfashionhaiku

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 5:14:00 PM

A nice Fall Haiku, Jo. Good luck! I want to congratulate you for having three poems in the latest Poetry Soup Anthology! YEAH !!! Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/15/2023 10:40:00 AM

Aesthetic

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/14/2023 4:31:00 PM

Autumn is not shy about her bold fashion choices ... And, neither were you, Joanna, with this creative and lovely write :) Well done!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 2:55:00 AM

I knew this would be a top winner! Congratulations. Well deserved

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2023 11:03:00 AM

Succinct explanative that nip-it-in-the--oh well--the end! Beautiful coursing, Joanna, and my compliments on your 1st placement win in Andrea's contest, my friend! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:08:00 AM

very clever one! Congrats to you

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 9:29:00 PM

Oh my, this is such an eloquent lil haiku with vivid autumnal imageries and breathtaking alliterative flow in the first line.. "red resplendent rage fall undresses verdant trees" Wow, I truly love this, one can feel the soft russet breezes.. Beautifully knitted in words! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 11:06:00 AM

A lovely "fall fashion" write. I can see it all before me. Have a blessed day..........

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/19/2023 3:14:00 AM

beautiful imagery is created here; nice to read

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 2:53:00 AM

Ah i am in awe of how you’ve written this haiku! Those alliterations wordplay and your way with describing things in just few syllables is beyond impressive! I love especially “ fall undresses verdant trees” exquisite! And the title! Is so gorgeous! Pleasure reading this, wish you a lovely day ahead