Get Your Premium Membership

Fall Came Early

Fall came a trifle early And it caught me unaware-- Seems the leaves began their falling Turning circles in the air. I could hear the end of summer With the rustle of the trees-- As I latched up every window To escape the chilly breeze. But the cold it overtook me As it slipped beneath the door-- And the moaning wind, it whispered: "The summer is no more!" ~Mel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 AM
Leaves turning circles in the air..that is the best line. Nice, Cuz...BG
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 AM
Leaves turning circles in the air..that is the best line. Nice, Cuz...BG
Login to Reply
Merrill Avatar
Mel Merrill
Date: 8/25/2014 3:37:00 PM
That was the Merrill side :) Thanks cuz, for the read and nice comment...xxx...mel
Date: 8/25/2014 12:51:00 AM
Very nice. Liked every line of this. A real complete piece.
Login to Reply
Merrill Avatar
Mel Merrill
Date: 8/25/2014 3:34:00 PM
Thank you. Sometimes they come together,; sometimes not. Thanks for the visit and generous comment :)
Date: 8/25/2014 12:48:00 AM
I have the AC AND fan on at the same time, MEL. It is HOT over here! ;) Going to catch some sun in sunny Cyrus soon. This is a lovely piece, my dear.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/25/2014 3:34:00 PM
:) How big are ya? ;) You'd love CY....Oh...I'm going to swim to my heart's content. I'm in my element in the water!
Merrill Avatar
Mel Merrill
Date: 8/25/2014 3:33:00 PM
And have a nice trip....stick me in your luggage!
Merrill Avatar
Mel Merrill
Date: 8/25/2014 3:32:00 PM
Hey girl. Hot here too. I had to use my imagination for this one :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things