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Fall

The blood of nature seeps from branches as it falls carried by wind’s laugh in a journey through time’s bid onto man-trodden concrete. Thunder bellows rage while clouds shroud themselves in tears and lightning shreds night carving glimpses of shadows into dusk’s timeless glory. Grey skies petrified look over earthen colors encompassing cold winds of change in the seasons as was done in years of old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/29/2014 12:59:00 PM
Powerful images....congratulations on your nice win...
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:16:00 AM
Hi Robyn, this is such a beautiful write! Huge congratulations to you for your great win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:54:00 AM
Thank you everyone for the reviews and compliments! :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:48:00 AM
beautiful images of Fall, Robyn. Congrats on a fine win. hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful tankas on fall, Robyn. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:05:00 AM
Incredible images painted in these sensational tankas. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:45:00 PM
A very descriptive look at the landscape of fall. WEll crafted tanka series, Robyn. Congrats in my contest.
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