Fall

Fall Rising Cooling mist Deep inhaling Breathe!

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/25/2010 9:39:00 AM

A beautiful atmosphere of Autumn you created using only few words...Great. Thank you for your comment. Love, iolanda

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/25/2010 7:10:00 AM

I do love your image of fall in this Lanterne, Audrey! Hope you'll have a great Sunday and not too misty!....Love, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2010 2:35:00 PM

Ah, can't wait to inhale some "cooling mist" when I move, Audrey. Hope to see some colorful foliage on my way to NJ. This is a lovely lanterne, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 1:49:00 PM

Audrey, splendid image you have created. Hope your weekend will be a fabulous one. Love, Wilma