Fall .

Autumn

Summer's  farewell

Harvesting  the  bounty

Preparing  for  Winter's  anger

Saved .


Having been tagged by Dane Ann , I now hand the baton to Brian Strand , to continue this 
Cinquain sequence .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Byrne Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Winters anger-I like that!
Strand Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 2:09 AM
This affair was indeed a bridge too far for Fabio ,Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Strand Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 1:14 AM
Very poetic blog comment Sean (one to post !)Rgds Brian
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:03 AM
excellent work
Jordan Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 6:57 AM
Hi Sean - excellent use of this form and an excellent choice of who to follow it up - God Bless, YF4L, mj
Strand Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Finally emptied in all my rainwater butts,its been so dry here since beginning of August.They say in the last 100 years 30 Setembers thereof have been warmer than June.Certainly true this year.Have a good day Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Golden Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Lovely tribute to my favorite season, Sean! Hugs, Donna P.S...I've missed your footles!
George   Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 9:56 AM
EXACTLY! Great Cinquain, dear Sean. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie
Strand Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:06 AM
What is it that makes me think politicians only pay lip service to democracy.Now if there were a tie...Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Chamma Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 7:16 AM
That's one great write..."Winter's anger" is a shrewd expression... Thank you for your comments... Always, Farah
Gorelick Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Sean, I only write footles to get your response..they are always hilarious. BG
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Hi Sean, This is a beautiful poem. Where have you been? Smiles, Dane Ann
Strand Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Thanks for your welcome comments today Sean Enjoy the late summer sun.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 12:53 AM
I see your men are back on song this week Sean.Enjoy the sunshine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
 Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Interesting perspective on the upcoming season. Hope the winter isn't too angry this year. We had enough snow to last us for two years last year. Nice use of personification in this poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Gass Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 4:06 PM
My Dear Mr. Kelly, this is lovely but I feel like I came in at the middle of the movie, so to speak. I have missed a lot! I have much catching up to do and will be investigating this "tagged" sequence! Thank you for the Royal welcome. The castle flag is flying high! With love from the palace, QR
Moreno Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 12:34 PM
Excellent work, nice visual...Raul
Strand Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 9:23 AM
Than you for your comments Sean,hopefully England will do so this eveing as well.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Nice one Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Gorelick Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Good job...I especially love "Preparing for winter's anger"...BG
Shahwan Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful..poised.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Nice job, Sean. This is cute. I always think of squirrels when I think of autumn. I guess it's because of they are save-ed from winter hunger by their autumn labors. Reading your cinquain today has been a pleasure. Thank you for accepting the challenge. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Devonshire Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 5:52 AM
Very well done, Sean. You capture the transition of seasons beautifully in your cinquaiin! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Interesting description of fall. Every line adds its own flavor. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 4:04 AM
Fantastic Sean. I agree with your Cinquain. Thank you for continuing the challenge. Love, Carol
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace