Fall

March is unique here --
Auburn leaves dropping from trees,
Returning to dust,
Chilling winds howling southwards
Heralding winter's coming.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2023 5:36:00 AM

We, in India, have winter before March. A revelation for me. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Miguel Nakano
Date: 4/10/2023 2:23:00 PM

oh, India? Gorgeous place, really want to go there someday. Thank you for the kind words, Alex!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2023 11:01:00 AM

i really like this one. Where are you? Congrats for the win

Miguel Nakano
Date: 4/10/2023 2:21:00 PM

thanks a lot! I'm from Brazil, weird seasons here, autumn is usually colder than winter