Fall

We lazed in the sun, a small town square;
I ate a croissant while we were there;
she had a coffee, and I, a tea.
I glanced at her, and then she at me.
Somewhere in France, not sure even where;
Sunday, people coming from prayer.
We thought to ourselves, “what do you see?”
“Is this quite how you thought it would be?”
Under a hat, a lock of gray hair;
slight tarnish on the silverware.
A leaf slow, gently fell from a tree
and landed softly upon your knee;
its rusty fall red, a scar to wear.
We sit still awhile; we look, we stare;
“I so love you still,” you say to me,
“I you too, as it should always be.”



The Way We Look Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker
Date wrote: 11th December 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Meadows Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 10:49 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Miller Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette have a happy 2023
Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 5:25 PM
This is a classic, Terry. So sweet, tinged with that lock of gray hair. A FAVE for me. Should have been POTD, methinks. Bravo, Gershon
Miller Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 1:01 AM
Hi praise indeed Gershon, thank you so much.
Fowler Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 5:17 PM
So sweet and romantic Terry. A trip to remember! :)
Miller Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 1:03 AM
Four weeks into a six week tour of France and Spain, so much to see so many memories, I write a little if something comes to me, but mainly soaking up the art, and landscape. Thank you for your kind comments.
Volumes Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 1:50 AM
Such a romantic piece Terry, and a beautiful setting. Your trip to France must have been wonderful. enjoyed reading this poem.
Miller Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 12:54 AM
Thank you Wendy, we are in Spain now for Christmas, back to France for New Year, escaping the cold and relaxing.
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