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We lazed in the sun, a small town square; I ate a croissant while we were there; she had a coffee, and I, a tea. I glanced at her, and then she at me. Somewhere in France, not sure even where; Sunday, people coming from prayer. We thought to ourselves, “what do you see?” “Is this quite how you thought it would be?” Under a hat, a lock of gray hair; slight tarnish on the silverware. A leaf slow, gently fell from a tree and landed softly upon your knee; its rusty fall red, a scar to wear. We sit still awhile; we look, we stare; “I so love you still,” you say to me, “I you too, as it should always be.” The Way We Look Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker Date wrote: 11th December 2022

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Date: 1/4/2023 10:49:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/6/2023 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette have a happy 2023
Date: 12/21/2022 5:25:00 PM
This is a classic, Terry. So sweet, tinged with that lock of gray hair. A FAVE for me. Should have been POTD, methinks. Bravo, Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 1:01:00 AM
Hi praise indeed Gershon, thank you so much.
Date: 12/19/2022 5:17:00 PM
So sweet and romantic Terry. A trip to remember! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 1:03:00 AM
Four weeks into a six week tour of France and Spain, so much to see so many memories, I write a little if something comes to me, but mainly soaking up the art, and landscape. Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 12/18/2022 1:50:00 AM
Such a romantic piece Terry, and a beautiful setting. Your trip to France must have been wonderful. enjoyed reading this poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/19/2022 12:54:00 AM
Thank you Wendy, we are in Spain now for Christmas, back to France for New Year, escaping the cold and relaxing.

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