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Fake World

Down to the Earth she reside Although many times she gyved But from all the negativity she survived For mental peace many times she skived But about all her weaknesses she shrived Yes in this fake world she thrived!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/17/2018 8:21:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem this is especially the last line, I really enjoyed reading it. I wish you a very warm welcome here on poetrysoup, I am sure that you will enjoy your long stay here, good luck and continue to write
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Kaif Ul Wara
Date: 7/18/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks mate this means a lot to me.
Date: 7/17/2018 5:07:00 AM
Kaif.. I enjoyed reading your Fake World this morning!!
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Kaif Ul Wara
Date: 7/18/2018 8:00:00 AM
I'm glad to hear that.

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