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Fake Noise

loudest words askew drastic times tempt the masses oh, those lying eyes

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Date: 11/2/2022 6:07:00 AM

Very nice senryu Franci!

Franci Hoffman
Date: 11/2/2022 7:03:00 AM

Thank you very much, Linda!

Date: 2/18/2022 10:40:00 AM

Sad but true. Thanks for sharing.?

Franci Hoffman
Date: 2/21/2022 4:21:00 PM

Thank you! I hope we see the light at the end of the tunnel soon.

Date: 7/20/2021 5:09:00 PM

I see fake at every turn. So I really like this.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 8/19/2021 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Date: 7/20/2021 2:24:00 PM

Your ending line spells the essence of your poem. Well said, Franci.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 8/19/2021 3:03:00 PM

Many thanks, Vijay.

Date: 7/16/2021 4:32:00 PM

Well done Franci :)

Franci Hoffman
Date: 8/19/2021 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi.

Date: 3/23/2021 12:46:00 PM

That third line is a real lulu, Franci! Love it! :) gw

Franci Hoffman
Date: 8/19/2021 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon.

Date: 2/23/2021 5:43:00 PM

You accomplished a lot with just seventeen syllables.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 3/8/2021 7:17:00 AM

Thank you, Robert!

Date: 2/23/2021 12:00:00 PM

There is a lot in this small piece. There is truth and subtlety. :)

Franci Hoffman
Date: 3/8/2021 7:17:00 AM

Thank you for you very kind comment!