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Fake Jewelry Fake Tree Fake You Fake Me

Fake jewelry fake tree, fake fur, a fun-filled faker’s life 
Artificial flowery fakery, fake man, fake wife. 
Fake you, fake me, fake compliments, fake boobs they surely be, 
Unknown feelings, hidden.  Fake you, can you see fake you and fake me?

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Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2019 10:51:00 AM

So much fakery in this world...lol This is awesome, Caren. Well done :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2019 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Charles; I had not noticed it before. I guess I am waking up.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2019 9:12:00 AM

You are a clever poetess who always brings out the deep essence of her words. Fake unfortunately is all around us and that saddens me - great write Caren. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2019 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. It does make me think.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/18/2019 8:26:00 AM

Real cool poetry, Caren!! Love the sharp satirical wit ... cutting to the heart of the genuine article. Fabulous witty poem. Love and joy always.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2019 11:51:00 AM

I do have a little bit of a wit and it happily wags itself out of crevices before I can stop it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2019 10:09:00 PM

The big fake out! Nice one!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2019 11:51:00 PM

I am always about fake stuff, for fun, not for real.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2019 9:54:00 PM

A great one, Caren, to much fakery in this world.. Honesty is what I'm always looking for..

Eve Roper
Date: 1/18/2019 10:28:00 PM

Awe, that is the nicest words from anyone I have ever heard. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Hugs forever

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2019 11:52:00 PM

Eve, that is why your poetry always resonates in my heart.

Bette Bavington

Date: 1/17/2019 7:21:00 PM

This is so true. There are so many fake this, that, things and people that it is hard to figure out sometimes if you are talking to a person or not because they just don't know. Enjoyed reading your poem. I hope all is well with you and yours in this new year.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2019 11:53:00 PM

When robots start checking out all of the groceries, where will the lonely people go to say "hello" to someone? I am worried about this.