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Faithful Paradox

To argue a point illogical of Precept’s grace... `Tis argument distinguish of beastly concepts For the expanse is from Precept advance... From space a face is given of faith’s grace Illogical to set ones pace illogical of grace... For the face is space without precept of grace Selah

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2012 1:05:00 PM

I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Moses. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2012 10:56:00 PM

I'm with CArolyn. I really like the message of that last line too. Lots of nice internal rhyme in this one.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2012 12:31:00 PM

Oh, what a clever last line, John. You and I have communicated for years about precept vs. concept, but I don't think I've ever seen the message presented so eloquently. Without the precept of grace, we'd be airheads (faces that utilize space). It is only through love that grace can be found. I'm wondering if you received the emails I sent to you. I'm in Key West now - fishing starts tomorrow. Wish you were here! Love and blessings, Carolyn

John Freeman
Date: 4/16/2012 12:46:00 PM

No I have not received any emails from you. Did you recieve mine about the handgliding? Moses

Shirley Long

Date: 4/15/2012 6:35:00 PM

Well written poem, I enjoyed reading it today,

Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/15/2012 1:44:00 PM

Hm.. Interesting writing John... Keeps one meditating... Keep it up! .. Love Diana

John Rhinem

Date: 4/15/2012 1:23:00 PM

Smile ˜ Humpty Dumpty, Set On A Wall ˜ Ahhhh, The Air Is Soooo Fresh * Love Always, John!.) ˜