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Faith

On a road that's supposed to be straight my life has changed mostly from faith a turn from the road helped me to do a life once mapped out has led me to you I see the stars and I see the sun My heart is so full and nowhere to run My words are real the thoughts are true but most of all I love you..

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/26/2011 8:43:00 AM

Awww, this is sweet... I like this!!! Lovely Rhyming :)

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/9/2011 5:23:00 PM

This was a touching poem my friend. your many kind comments have reminded my of my favorite thing to do also. go back and read the start of the soupers journey and i am also not disappointed. this was a wonderful piece. thank you for stopping by with all of your kind comments, wishing you well. --Madison

Elizabeth Bark

Date: 12/12/2010 1:47:00 PM

i love this poem...i went back as far as possible...=) thanks for the advise...i wrote about my window...i would love to hear your take on it micheal with love always and forever...lizzy.b...<3

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2010 3:54:00 AM

"a life once mapped out.".. that says so much about life.. we can plan.. but destiny will place our feet on the path we are intended to take~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2010 4:51:00 PM

and this poem has beauty to it, i like the fourth line how somewhere along the line or no matter what it was already predestined that you two would meet, a lovely write on love.. luv P.D.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2010 4:47:00 PM

Michael, believe it or not I felt the connection, but I did not want to jump to conclusions. Instead I left a long comment, on how we are all connected. I really felt the branches connecting between the distance of myself. That is why I replied at the end,(( I am sure this person some how thinks the same.)) It is funny, how when I see your name I think in my mind, "I got dibs on his poem!" sorry you are one of the many poets I look forward to on the soup.~I even added it to my favs~,..luv P.D.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 8/24/2010 7:08:00 AM

this is wonderful...you have a gift with words!

Brian Strand

Date: 8/22/2010 6:37:00 AM

Nice love poetry here Michael.Rgds Brian

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2010 6:31:00 AM

Good Morning Michael,,wow! i was just curios & Snooping to see what your first poem would look like on the soup,,hope you do not mind. I enjoyed your poem.. I loved the way you have the best faith in your loved one...Have a nice and wonderful day,..LeeAnn

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/17/2010 4:43:00 AM

Sweet write indeed, awesome way to convey your love... WNN

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 6/20/2010 3:06:00 PM

Sweet and to the point - I envy the lady on the other end who is receiving your romantic poetry..

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/10/2010 5:18:00 PM

Michael~ Congratulations on your featured poem faith is a great thing! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/8/2010 6:20:00 AM

Welcome and congratulations my friend. GBU. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2010 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Michael. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/7/2010 5:51:00 PM

Well deserved feature. Congrats Michael. Vince

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2010 7:40:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/5/2010 7:29:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/4/2010 4:42:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, good one!!

Date: 4/4/2010 4:02:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2010 3:26:00 PM

This is quite precious, Michael. Congrats on being featured!! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 4/4/2010 1:38:00 PM

Michael, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Susan Palli

Date: 2/23/2010 5:26:00 AM

Sweet love poem

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/15/2010 5:26:00 AM

thank you L'nass always wanted to try this and was a little shy until someone said I should share my thoughts...

L'Nass Shango

Date: 2/8/2010 5:57:00 AM

I love this beautiful poem that reminds me of my longer poem "branches." A great write, I am honored to call such a noble soul my friend.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 3:19:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol