Fairy Tales

I've always been attracted to the other world.
You know,  the world in between life and death.
The one you always see out of the corner of your eye.
Was always that little girl who wanted to be someplace. 

Someplace more exciting than the place I was standing. 
I always knew there was something more exciting waiting.
More exciting than where I was standing, new adventures. 
Where the stardust falls at midnight, with sunrise delight. 

World of whispers and flickering shadows in the moonlight. 
Where the fairies and frogs and fireflies dance all night. 
I call it my consensual reality in my alternate universe.  
Come, take my hand, the land of enchantment is waiting. 

It was always ok that I was the only one that believed.   
Believed in the unseen world of the magical light beings. 
I see the gargoyles conversing with the pigeons high up.
Sometimes they wink at me as they turn back to stone. 

They pretend that way, so no one will catch on to them.
Trouble with magick is most people don't believe in it. 
Though I'm sure they could if they kept hold of dreams.
And childlike natures and the innocents of childhood.
 
They don't believe in what's buried deep down inside. 
If you tried, I know you could see just what I see. 
Fairies with rainbow colored wings fly against the sun.
Or dancing along the milky way in the pale moonlight.   

And the shoemaker's magick shop is where they live.  
They are always delighted when you come for a visit.



 12:30am   3/ 3 2013
I wrote this as I was waiting for my daughter Jessie to come home from bowling.
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January 14, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thank you for your comment Debbie,~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer
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October 20, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Debbie, nice Fairy Dust, winning poem........... love ~SKAT~
Duncan Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 1:42 AM
Thank you ;}
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October 17, 2013 at 4:04 PM
a lovely walk seen through your eyes ty congrats on win Shadow x smile
Duncan Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Thank you ,, I had to check it out to see ;} I placed 5 in contest ;}
A   Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Debbie, congratulations on your win...LINDA
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October 16, 2013 at 10:32 PM
congrats.nate
Duncan Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 3:02 AM
Thank you Nathan ;}
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 1:47 PM
hey, did you check out that contest for fairy poems? he may have changed his rules and allowed it to be about anything to do with fairies! I bet this would be a good entry.
Duncan Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 7:56 PM
I didn't know ;}
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April 21, 2013 at 9:09 AM
"Someplace more exciting than the place I was standing" << really love that line there! That's what I think is so great about imagination... if you have a strong enough one you can create whatever world you wish to live in. You have the power to see yourself in some magical land even when in reality you're in some mundane place like an office building. Awesome work!
Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Tim ;}
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April 17, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Don't ever lose that inner child with all it's magical muse. Nicely done. love phyl
Duncan Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Thank you phyllis ;}
Allen Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Keep your inner child alive and well with all it's imaginings. We would all be much healthier mentally and physically if we just remember how to play. Huggs Tlee
Duncan Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 9:02 PM
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March 31, 2013 at 8:55 PM
I like the write, don't ever lose your inner-child my friend.
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April 4, 2013 at 8:48 PM
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March 29, 2013 at 5:15 AM
This is exactly what I think fairyland looks like....I love to believe, it makes me happy!
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March 27, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Debbie; I too always wonder about that other world that we can't see. I believe in the spirits of our loved ones that have passed on. I believe that they are in another demention and that sometimes they come back and help us. Do you think that Fairy Tales are just for Kids. I don't, Thanks for sharing.....Lucilla
Duncan Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 8:14 PM
I most definitely believe '}
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March 27, 2013 at 12:47 PM
We hesitate to take a look at what's just over there. We caught a glimpse of what we think, but simply just don't dare. Alice fell into the screen and found a paridise. Where shoemakers live, fairies dance and mad hatters give advice. So Jessie's home, and you no longer roam. Where dreamers spend their days. But we'll be glad to take the trip with you on your next stay. Enjoyed the fanciful journey Debbie. Have a fairy tale day. :)
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March 27, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Oh I like that Robert ;}
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March 27, 2013 at 5:50 AM
Debbie - In my humble opinion this is the best work of yours I have seen so far...3rd line of the first verse is a real stunner...Glad you are back in good health too - Tim
Duncan Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Thank you Tim.
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March 27, 2013 at 12:06 AM
debbie. this is very nice. You remind me of a friend of mine who swears she saw fairies in her attic!! by the way, I hope you are truly better now. Sorry you were sick for so long. Luv, Andrea
Duncan Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 12:50 AM
thank you Andrea ;}
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March 25, 2013 at 1:47 PM
- Hope you will be well soon Debbie - Wish you a nice Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) <3
Jones Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 10:50 AM
I love this Debbie...the inbetween world...my mom has been there.the things she describes are beautiful...blessings...Donna
Duncan Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 5:15 PM
thank you ;}
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March 24, 2013 at 2:19 PM
There is a lot of enchantment still in this beautiful world of ours. It takes a good eye and a clever brain to experience it. Good for you. It is for most of us somewhat of a struggle to merely survive. Thank goodness for a little poetry in our lives, and thank-you for you!
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March 19, 2013 at 11:21 AM
This poem exalts my spirit. It flows smooth because of the magic thing
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March 26, 2013 at 4:27 PM
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A   Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Debbie, your poem is lovely, i like the dancing under the moonlight image. Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Always* LINDA
Duncan Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thank you ;}
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March 18, 2013 at 3:27 AM
- I "see" and feel what you describe, Debbie .... fascinating, exciting and sometimes a little "scary" .... but I'm sure it's something that we do not know .... - Well written about the "unknown"! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Duncan Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Anne .
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