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Fairy Garden at Twilight


In a fairy garden magic grows
amid creeping vines and velvet moss. 
Impatiens  red
Lobelia blue
Tiny houses peep out from leaves
where Spring bulbs sleep there deep beneath

At twilight -- sparks of light rise up
fairies of fireflys' ?
I 'll let  you guess 
the secret of my happiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Wow! A secret, not so secret, magical, mystical garden. It is all about eyes, ears and heart~ how they open to Light. Spiritual essence overflowing. Love it!
Manassian Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 6:45 AM
How enchanting! I'd love to visit this garden. Some words are new to me. Thank you for taking me on this adventure with you.
One Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Your garden sounds lovely... You expressed this one so well..
Delaney Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 3:34 PM
Thanks S.O. Magic really does happen there. When I replanted this year a natural mushroom appeared overnight and it always rains immediately after I plant new flowers. It is a happy spot for me.
Allison Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 6:26 AM
absolutely charming Suzanne - we call the flowers Bizzy Lizzies! hugs jan xx
Delaney Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 8:12 AM
I have heard that, Jan but was never sure which flower it referred to thanks for the lovely comment and fun fact. You rock. SuZ
M  Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Such a sweet bright twilight write! A lovely magical feel Suzanne! Debx
Delaney Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 8:14 AM
Hi Deb: Long time since seeing you. So happy you liked my fairy garden. The Creeping Oak and Creeping Jenny will have fully covered the soil by summer's end and I will write another update. Visits soon. SuZ
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 7:10 PM
Such a dreamy, impressive write only you can design-- a brevity of a verse well handled...let me have both fey and firefly! I miss you too, suZ: keep that ink burning; huggs
Delaney Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Nette: With you around to inspire I shan't fail. I'll check out the Contests or make something up..Huggs SuZ
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